The Beast of Kulain
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Description
Val, a young man betrayed by his loved ones and cast out for being a dall'in, a beast controlled by it's endless hunger. Dall'ins' are remorseless and pitiless, with barely a mind of their own. Cast out and forced to flee from those hunting him, he runs to the Kuran mountain range and attempts to hide. Where will he be taken in this world of blood and iron, when he begins to hear a voice urging him forward to greater heights, what will he do to obtain power immemorial?
The story begins in the mountain ranges, and his past is slowly revealed as to how he became what he is. But the question is, if dall'ins' are mindless beasts with no forethought. Then what manner of beast is Val?
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First story constructive feedback pls papi
cover from book called the kings bastard byRowena Cory Daniellsty to91Blodhevnfor tellin me
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- bud
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 57
- Views
- 16,057
Chapters(8 total)
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Community Reviews(3)
- ArkieceRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Shitz fire yo. For real this is a nice story, could flow a little better, could use better structure, but the actual story and descriptions are really solid. Interesting characters, well set up lore, worth the read. Keep em' comin'. Wanna see what else happens with Val.
- My pen is mightierRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0amaseing story, keep at it!
your way of explaneing things is realy clear, thats not somthing one can just pick up, you have real talent. Realy cool consept, and i like how you made him struggle and not have some god come out of noware and do evorything for him, makeing him king or somthing. - Iris-Royal Road★★★★ 4.0This piece of work is still in its Early stages, however it shows great promise. As of (chapter 8) I've enjoyed the story and there haven't been any moments where I wanted to palm my face. I can see that in the most recent chapters you've introudced a 'companion' if you must for comic relief. There have been moments in the later chapters where the fight sequence should have been serious but the character displayed some humour which in my opinion was a bit ' out of character'. Overall though, this story is right up my alley. Your story telling is leaps and bounds above most of the garbage posted here. I'll continue to read it and put up a more thorough review down the line. ( hopefully)