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A man died on a certain day after getting betrayed by the love of his life. Filled with regret he went to the underworld only to meet a reaper with the same circumstance, so the reaper gave him an offer, an offer for another chance a chance at reincarnation. Now reborn will he finally live his life without regret? or will he fall before the challenges?

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bladejesterRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

i give you a cookie for a good story thus far, im hoping it gets even better. ive seen alot of improvement in the story telling over the portion ive read thus far and im impressed

kirosyamchaRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

The story is good overall, its a little lacking on details but its a fun read the further you get i think.

Divine_ReaderRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

I find it an a very good storyline and character build. One of the better storys i read here. Just the grammar needs to improve. Defenatly needs a editor or proofreader.

PrimodeusRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

Well I like the idea and the story. You just need an editor. And I notice some Filipino stuff, keep it up. I hope for more chapters and for better work.

nugyRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

I can enjoy the read, but definitely needs to find an editor.

mioRoyal Road

★★★ 3.0

you need to use komma's "",,,,,,,"" like these, see?
you need to make your pauses and such obvious, or it won't be a real sentence with feeling in it. punctuation can change everything to a sentence.
like so:
a woman, without her man, is nothing
a woman; without her, man is nothing
same sentence, opposite meanings, all because of punctuation

xtremeloldudeRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

The general idea and direction of the story are pretty good, however that word "general" is the issue here. Too much of the story is glossed over with barely any attention to detail. The worldbuilding is nonexistent

TreyonRoyal Road

★★★ 2.5

The story could be much better and its really fast paced, the events go extremely fast. The story its quite good and the characters are good too, but there are problems regarding the elements within the story, first it said that MC has 8 elements but so far has only used 6 (water, ice, earth, fire, lightning and light), things happens and we have no idea how that happened... and some other
An important problem of this fic would be the grammar.... and i have to say, someone who even cares a little of what he/she writes would spend at least some time editing so it can be read properly but thankfully its not the worst grammar i have seen and the story and characters can be understood well enough, there are even some online grammar checking sites that check for grammar mistakes.
As for background, like description on things like a town or something? almost none of it.

DaraichRoyal Road

★★ 1.5

So, thirst of all, thank you for sharing your story.
But Dude, the pace of the story is like: Born, got power, saw a girl, got mire power, more girls, learnt easely what I wanted, etc.
I'm astonished that by the end of chapter 13 he's not allready an old man dying.
Try to give the story a little more context. I know OP MC's are a thing, but write at least some more how he's trying.
Got Swords easy, check. Got magic easy, check. Got Blacksmithing easy, check.
You see, there is not a single thing that makes him or his journey interesting.

A little worldRoyal Road

★ 1.0

Another harem story? You know, there's a reason why I started to look for female-led stories. Less harem inbound.

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