The Arrayist

Self-Published

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Description

The world has many paths for each person; to live a simple life, to become rich, to become famous, to become the strongest, to explore the world.Many ancient civilizations fell and history faded through the sands of time. Within one of the rising empires, a youth, Teo, encounters a mysterious turtle that will help him find his path as an Arrayist.Inspired by mostly Xianxia and Wuxia web novels such as Coiling Dragon, Against the Gods, I Shall Seal the Heavens, Chaotic Sword God, and True Martial World.Note: The story is a really slow starter, be warnedThis is also my first "novel", most chapters are in a rough draft form unless marked otherwise. This work is also hosted at: http://www.bycienz.com/

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Cienz

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.9/ 5.0
Followers: 813
Views: 617,464

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Community Reviews(10)

googobavaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Good grammar, interesting and fully developed world. Has a lot of potential in the future.
HephaestusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story is more unique and original than most on Royalroad in the sense we have an arrayist instead of an alchemist the fact our Mc starts out weaker than what is usual but it also adds so many different ways this story could go other people like cerulean dropped it just because the MC didn't start off massively op i believe our character will get there personally i enjoy watching our Mc's go from a weak or average to strong or even Op i think the author is doing a fantastic job so far with so many avenues and secrets hidden in the text, plot and characters can't wait for them to reveal themselves :)
omgsenpaiRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Like the title said, the author does a great job in storytelling. His pacing is on point. The best is that MC's op trait is not too op and actually quite different in that it forces him to use inscriptions/arrays in a fight.
RudeusRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Fuck all of you bast area complaining that it's going "knowhere", there doesn't have to be a major antagonis and there's also some foreshadowing for possible future conflicts done in a subtle way, great job!
crasyone47Royal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
hello
helo
this is not bad actually
CourtDeathRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The author was true to his word, the first few chapters were indeed slow and even boring (the arent the same mind you), and unlike other Xianxias that slowly build up to a strong story this one is a little underwhelming since its not slow just boring.
But from chapter 10ish onwards it does get better! Not sure if the author's getting beter along the way but enduring the beginning was worth it!
wraith26Royal Road
★★★ 3.0
i like it at first.. but theres no excitement.. the school arc is one hell of a boring arc for me...i hope the mc wont end up naive hero of justoce character.. if he did.. i will curse this ff to eternal damnation..
CeruleanRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I have to drop this story the fact that he has to have all 1s instead of 3s for no reason
Ruined this for me.Its the basic MC has one problem bullyed for it then got strong really
annoyed me.
jburge1Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
It is a good idea of a story. Unfortunately, it lacks detail. The character development is shallow, the magic system is poorly described, and the story telling needs a lot of work. Even for a rough draft, this is rough.
RaizenRoyal Road
★ 0.5
I am sorry, but this story is going nowhere real quick. If you want to maintain people's interest then the main character has to be worth it. As far as I am concerned the MC is an annoying homebody. All the action has been him getting his butt kicked. You are 27 chapters in and it is already a snorefest. I don't feel the connection to the MC. Something else to consider is how you are focusing on every little detail of his school life. It is too much. I suggest you focus on small important parts throughout. Otherwise it jus feels tedious.