In the far future, humanity discovers that aliens exist. Concerned with the future of their species, they make efforts to hide their true nature to prevent the possibility of an all out war. Everything was working fine until one fateful day, when their secret finally gets out.

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PyxelRoyal Road

★★★★★ 5.0

Everything is written amazingly well and I mean everything from world-building, word choice and the attention to detail in the descriptions. It never gets boring and it's just unpredictable enough so it doesn't feel random or wrong, the relationships that are being made are beautiful and are natural in the way they form. Nothing about the writing feels lazy or boring it is beautifully written and should be made into a full book series and/or movies/TV series.
Extremely well done to the author and I am really excited for the next chapter I cannot wait to see what happens next!

PKMindWorksRoyal Road

★★★★★ 4.5

There are some holes in the exposition including the reason behind the protagonist's blatant disregard for orders and procedures. Despite that rocky start, this has turned out to be a quite intriguing story. The main characters are interesting, and you have to love the ship names. Better descriptions would help elevate the writing: "something that looks like ..." with a name the reader may or may not know is fine for a draft but not the best for publishing.
Overall I highly recommend giving it a read!

rrname12321Royal Road

★★★★ 4.0

So while the writing style is good the main kick off event is really puzzling. I feel like an agent for the human race would make absolutely sure that humanity's secrets would not just get exposed like that. Like some sort of atomic failsafe or a emergency communication to just obliterate everything space around him. Not "Oh shucks! Sorry about humanity lying to the entire galaxy about how weak and vulnerable humanity is!". I feel like it would have been better if this was exposed in a different way.

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