The Archangel

Self-Published

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Description

How do you know what's real and what isn't?

For Michael Collins, sometimes it's impossible. Suffering from vivid, lifelike hallucinations and an ever-present, ever-annoying voice in his head, he's decided that it might be better to live out the rest of his high school days quietly. Not that he had any choice in the matter after being labeled a violent psychopath by his classmates. But when a mysterious caller threatens to publish a file exposing his dark past, he must scramble to meet all of his demands at any cost. Even if that means going head-to-head with the Demons, the city's unorthodox and ruthless criminal organization.

As he finds himself gaining new allies and enemies alike, Michael must move past his doubts and trauma to become the Archangel - a highly skilled vigilante hellbent on tearing the Demon organization apart. But will he be able to do that without driving himself insane first?

hey, i'm raseep. what can you expect from this story?- A smart-ass, powerful MC who's tripping constantly!- Gruesome, violent, detailed fights!- Dangerous criminals trying to take over your life!- A modern setting for once!If that sounds good to you, give this book a try and I hope you enjoy :)

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: raseep

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.8/ 5.0
Followers: 2
Views: 4,543

Chapters(15 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

DaoTianRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Okay, so "The Archangel" is definitely a wild ride. From what I've read so far, it's the kind of story that grabs you and doesn't let go. It throws you right into the action, and it's clear that things are about to get messy. Here's a more detailed breakdown:
Style: The writing has this cool, almost cinematic feel to it. The author uses really descriptive language when it comes to action scenes, making you feel like you're right there with Michael as he's getting hung upside down or when Isla's fighting in the red light district. There's also this snarky, sarcastic tone that runs through the dialogue, especially when Michael's inner monologue starts. It's kind of like a dark comedy at times, but then it gets serious and intense when it needs to. The way the author switches between characters and perspectives also adds to the story's tension and keeps you engaged.
Story: The plot is definitely hooking. You've got Michael, who's dealing with being captured and then forced to help this mysterious caller. Then you have Isla, running for her life, and it seems like they’re on a collision course. The story is really good at dropping hints about bigger things that are happening, like this "Skeleton Key", and it makes you want to keep reading to find out what's going on. The pacing is fast, with a lot of action, but it also knows when to slow down and give you some character moments. There's also this constant tension, like when you’re wondering whether Isla can actually trust Michael and you're wondering what his deal really is. It's a mystery wrapped in a thriller, with some fantastical elements.
Grammar: The grammar and spelling are pretty solid, and there aren't any obvious mistakes. The writing feels natural and easy to read, even during the more complex scenes. There is some swearing, but it does fit in with the tone of the story.
Characters: This is where the story really shines. Michael is a complex character, with this dark inner voice and this mysterious ability t
VillainryRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Okay, so "The Archangel" is definitely a trip, and in a good way. It throws you right into the action from the get-go, with Michael hanging upside down from a tree, and things just get wilder from there. It's not your typical fantasy story with dragons and elves; it's got this modern, urban feel with a dash of underworld.
Style: The writing style is pretty engaging. They use a lot of vivid descriptions and inner monologues that give you a real sense of what's going on in the characters' heads. The way they switch between characters and scenes keeps things fresh and moves the story along at a good pace. It's got a bit of a gritty, almost sarcastic tone at times, which I really liked. Plus, there are some crazy fight scenes that are so well written, you can practically see them happening.
Story: The plot is a rollercoaster. You've got Michael getting into trouble, then being forced to help find Isla. Then there's the whole Demons situation, which adds a layer of suspense and danger. The story is full of twists and turns, and it keeps you guessing about what's going to happen next.
Grammar: The grammar is solid overall. The spelling, punctuation, and sentence structure are all on point.
Characters: The characters are where this story really shines. Michael is a total enigma. He’s sarcastic, kind of messed up. His internal struggles and the way he interacts with the "other me" in his head is fascinating.
This is a story that grabs you and doesn't let go. It's not just a straightforward action story; it has a lot of emotional depth and some serious mysteries to uncover.