The apocalypse that saved the world
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Description
Nathanial smith is a perfectly average guy on the dying world Earth. Why is Earth dying you may ask, well the lack of mana will kill of humanity in a few generations, luckily the apocalypse happens or whatever you want to call it.
Urban fantasy, about a warlock.
Main characterperspective eventually.
i have chosen too put up chapters before i have them prof read, hope people can live with that.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2017
- Author
- Random Danish guy
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 1.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 8
- Views
- 9,627
Chapters(10 total)
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- SedactiveRoyal Road★ 1.0Ever read a novel where the first part you read just kinda drains you off all energy to continue on?
This novel kinda did that for me below is a part out of chapter 1, no spoilers just a kind of info dump by the author (not litteraly the style of this info dump is a kind of backstory).
Anyway read it and you will kinda understand what i mean me pointing this out has actually no value as its litteraly the beginning of chapter 1.
But for the author it may be of some use as 1 star is not really a good rating......
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in the beginning, there was only true nothingness, not the void true nothingness. from the nothingness came soul or will many words have been used to describe it over the ages. the old languages have better words for it but nothing, but the languages of the ancients does truly cover the realness of it the closest language that comes close are that of the Ents ancient creatures. Although what they use are more of the length of a novel so it’s not really that useful today and them being nearly extinct doesn’t really help that much. also, there’s not many creatures or scrolls much less actual books that explains it any more. the next concept that came too be was Urrh or the primordial energy that came before all other types of energy. later urrh gave rise to all the other energies the closer too urrh the more powerful.
but before that soul spawned chaos and order and urrh spawned creation and destruction.
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I know that the author has every right in the world to make up stuff or decide on names for his novel but come one Urrh?
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the next concept that came too be was Urrh or the primordial energy that came before all other types of energy. later urrh gave rise to all the other energies the closer too urrh the more powerful.
Its feels rather awkward to read this Urrh then later urrh hey urrh by urrh....
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I suggest the author to completely rewrite the beginning pretty it up a bit...
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