The antisocial hero

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Not a Hero

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Community Reviews(10)

• RonjohnRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Room for the characters and world to grow, but the author is writing with a goal and it shows in his story telling.
• voltv30Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  I like how this MC has unique personality being anti-social and how he sticks with it (hopefully) throughout the entire story. It's also great that unlike the other MC's in novels that think with their d**k this one thinks with his head while keeping to his personality. Your Doing Great Job!!!!!! and Please DO NOT turn this into a harem/romance style novel it really kills the flow of the story (usually because of fans). I've have been through thousands novels of 3 different languages and I only found 2 that are not crap!!!!!!!!!!!
• SpartanstorytellerRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  I wanna give it five stars just because of the amazingly release times but I also want to give a constructive review so first off the English could be a little better but it's still understandable and doesn't really break up the flow of the story so it's not a problem. The only issue I really have is that I think the fight scenes need a little more detail like describing the bloodbath gushing from the wound or how the main character perceives his surroundings ya know like how he must feel great heat inside the fire dragon dungeon and how it steals his breath away. But other than that I'm really impressed you really capture the main characters antisocial personality and set up a genuine personality instead of making him two dimensional and uninteresting. All though the other heroes are really two dimensional considering they are one of his biggest threats
• OdessiRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Hey this is better than most...
  Just for reference though, you should probably change antisocial to asocial, because asocial is when you avoid social interaction, which is what i think you mean.
  Antisocial is something completly different though. For instance Antisocial Personality Disorder is the diagnostic for people who are sociopaths and psychopaths. So if you are basically saying that Max is a guy who does not understand emotions and will kill people if it benefits him, then antisocial is right.
  However if he just avoids social interaction, asocial is a better term.
  Its an easy mistake to make, the only reason i know this is because i did a project on ASPD last school year. My first thought when i researched it, was "Well, that escalated quickly...."
  Remember ANTISOCIAL ≠ ASOCIAL, at least not unless you believe that all people that avoid social interaction have difficulty with emotions and will kill people if it benefits them.
  Honestly, if some people believe that, it kinda makes my future seem bleak...
• darksulikRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  So far this story has been good so far. want to see how character and story develop but a good start
• pewpewcachooRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  Looks like the author removed the story. I do remember reading about 20 chapters of this. The MC was summoned and pretty much told everyone to F-off. Left and sold his clothes for a lot of money, bought some weapons and books I think and went to train alone.
  Pretty much anytime an issue came up, something came along to help the MC out.
• ArararaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Forced myself to read all the chapters, hoping it'd get better. It didn't.
  Okay, so the main character is supposed to be asocial. A loner, not wanting to deal with other people unless he's absolutely forced to. But that's the deal, sometimes he's not forced to but he doesn't leave. Instead, he's overly rude and irritating. Not witty, sarcastic, or funny in any way, but toxic. I could accept that just being his personality, but it's only during dialogues, at other times he doesn't seem rude at all. It's unnecessary, and he could do a much better job of "being antisocial" without coming off as a asshole. And in 30 chapters, we haven't even seen a trace of character development, or him getting attache to anything. Maybe his gloves?
  There are some other characters, but only one can even be considered a side-character. She shows traces of a personality, but obviously serves as a plot-device that gives the MC strong spells for free because she's bored. And when he gets stuck against enemies too strong, she offers herself to wipe them. The rest of the characters aren't even worth mentioning, they're completely irrelevant. The king's actions make little sense, too.
  The setting is pretty standard and has some potential, but it's worth noting that by this time we have only exchanged a couple of scenes. None were well described. The dungeon, in which about half the chapters take place, is altogether decribed in at most 2 sentences. The castle is "a castle". The author leaves way too much to the reader's imagination.
  And the grammar is abysmal. The work is written very poorly and with utmost simplicity. While able to convey the meaning, the huge number of mistakes and poor style choices take away from any sort of immersion. The language can only be described as poor.
  Try it, if you want, but don't expect anything good.
• EvilGremlinRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  As of chapter 23 this story desperately need some actual struggling, or at least some promising foreshadowing. As of now - MC is a pampered princess, every his demand is satisfied immediately and completely.
  Also, style isn't descriptive enough, whorld and characters are some one-dimensional puppets. There is somewhat good point though, MC doesht think with his lower head. Like, at all. Which is totally unrealistic for teenager, unless he have some horrible hormonal dysfunction.
• FilthyleacherRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  I only got to chapter 10 before dropping this novel, but the hero is literally a asshole to everyone.
  First a pretty girl makes fun of him and insults his family which turns him into a asocial person which while believable still seems like a stretch. But because of that the character then acts like a asshole to everyone he meets. Hes a ass to the king shopkeepers and even people trying to help him for no reason, or because they said something that could be taken as mildy offensive.
  The hero also has no actual forward thinking ability, he must have some form of ADHD. As instead of getting anything from the king or even try to learn something he decides hes just going to run off to a dungeon to get stronger while knowing nothing about his world.
  Lastly from what ive seen the Mc's main goal seems to be to get revenge on the other heros, and he is nowhere near powerful enough and never will be. His "cheat" is he gains 10X xp while hes solo, which in itself is decent but not broken level strong. The female hero on the other hand has 10X the strength of all support magic, and if we make a educated guess the other 5 heros probably also have some type of 10x multiplier. And the mc's 10X bonus is diminished as the heros in a party of 6 can fight much stronger opponents then he can and get more Xp. At level 27 his highest stat is only 8 times more powerful then it was at level one. So as long as any of the heros are competent at level 1 they are stronger then him at 27. And if we use his best stat growth which is Physical Attack he only gains 2.7 a level. So using math he'd need to be level 33 to be as strong in his best stack as a hero would be at level 1. Xp also gets harder to increase each level by much more, so the hero needs to be atleast 33 levels higher then the other 6 heros which is impossible as the heros as the heros would probably be around level 10ish as Xp neeeded to level keeps increasing. And while the mc would only gain 2.7 in his best stat the heros would g
• ZeroDivideRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  The story seemed interesting until chapter 32.  After the author took a month break the quality of writing took a nosedive, the mc became extremely unlikeable, the story fell apart, and a large amount of moon logic became prevelant.  Hopefully some proofreading and edditing can be done to the following 30 chapters to bring it up to par with the first 30, because as it stands it quicky devolves from a good read into a must avoid story which I shall now abandon.