The Alpha Tester's Journal

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Description

Jonathan is a reclusive loner on break after graduating high school. With no family, no friends, and no girl, he finds the perfect job for a VR enthusiast: alpha testing a new generation of immersion module called W.I.F.E -- Wireless Immersion Fantasy Environment -- but don't think he'll ever refer to it that way. Capable of integrating with the existing game base, his only job is to play and the system will send reports back to the company in charge. You, my friend, have been given transcripts of this event packaged as nothing more than a detailed user manual for the virtualverse.

-- In response to a single review, please note the first few chapters, before "Mulwine" are backstory. Please be aware, I do know that no true gamer would ever condone the actions from these chapters with as little response as Jonathan provides on the surface.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2016
Author: Dreslief

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 2.5/ 5.0
Followers: 57
Views: 34,759

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

SedactiveRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This story has no reviews and as i checked the overal rating i noticed 3 stars from 4 diffrent peeps.
As to why this is i thought it to be weird until i read til chap 6.
Below is a comment i left at chap 5 :
Meh thought this was a VR story but its basically a typical story about some punshingbag that is always at the mercy of people around him.
Cannot remake character cannot wear mens cloths the game gives him a title or grandparents that basically enslaves him.
This is not a game if npcs can dictate what a person can do or cannot do to this degree.
In Dnd if any player or the GM pulls of such a stunt its kinda the worst tabboo that a person can commit.
Neve ever force a player to do something he doesnt want to or not give them the freedom to roleplay or play the way they want to.
So what is the problem here? a story is a story doesnt matter what it contains and that is probally why it got 3 stars as the grammar,spelling and execution is very decent.
Its just the style of the story and the premise are kinda crappy, its very missleading.
The description should say something along the lines of follow the adventures of Drake as he is forced to be act,dress and pee like a women.
While clearly being a man by the colorfull inhabitants of the VR game survival instinct -.-.
This is far more accurate than againt he missleading description we got here.
A VR game and yet the MC cannot do anything by his own will classic anime punshing bag.
Ever watched an anime were the MC is very girly looks like a female princess in the story wich he encounters when he is strolling around.
And is forced to disguise himself as her and marry a forgein prince in her stead -.- because the princess doesnt want to be forced to go along with it.
So she just forces another helpless chap,this is 100% the same except the annoying beginning.
Its supposed to be comedy but its infuriating i cannot really laugh......
RoknarRoyal Road
★ 1.0
This story basically sucks, not sure why the author decided to make a punching bag MC but damn somebody really doesn't like the mc. Not fond of GB stories to begin with but this one def heads to the bottom of the barrel.