The Aggresive Cheater

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2015

Author

Sebastien Michaelis

• Chapter 14: In love with red
  Jan 9, 2016
• Chapter 13: Tomb Raider
  Jan 5, 2016
• Chapter 12: Rival
  Jan 3, 2016
• Chapter 11: Night Visit
  Dec 27, 2015
• Chapter 10: Fame
  Dec 11, 2015
• Chapter 09: Potion of Insanity
  Dec 10, 2015
• Chapter 08: Chaos and Blood
  Dec 9, 2015
• Chapter 07: The Adventure Guild and Storm?
  Dec 9, 2015
• Chapter 06: Kingshill City
  Dec 8, 2015
• Chapter 05: Norman The Brute
  Dec 7, 2015
• Chapter 04: Pervert
  Dec 6, 2015
• Chapter 03: Teleportation
  Dec 6, 2015
• Chapter 02: Outrageous size
  Dec 5, 2015
• Chapter 01: Summoning gone wrong
  Dec 4, 2015

Reviews

Community Reviews(9)

• anime65Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Yeah make it harem.I like harem besides harem suits your story.
• 00petar00Royal Road

  ★★★★ 4.0

  Can't make a really good review with only 10 chapters and the story is just at the point where new characters are introduced mostly.
  But i can say that it is quite good, i would suggest that you use the blue columns, forgot the actual name for that. That's the problem with keeping track of things he learned and levels and such, you wrote about how he learned 231 or so spells, so it would be really hard to write/make them all up, but at least a normal status would be nice, so that we can see his level, mana and so on.
  Story is quite good, but i don't understand the name that you gave to your fiction, he was not really aggressive yet.
• SammaelRoyal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  A bit of spoilers!!
  I would agree with the first sentence written by Wohlzy.
  At first I liked the pace of the novel. But as the chapters progressed it become too rushed to uncoordinated.
  The Mc shows nothing of his  written and accented geniusnes.
  He didn't read/learn his spells he, acording to his skills asimilated all the knowledge from the books and made it his. This means all the parameters of spells should be in his brain, yet he once more shows that he is a stupid brat that nearly kills himself while using spells he should have total knowledge and control.
  Wohlzy writes that the Mc is a total human trash. I ask whats wrong with this? In my opinion theres nothing wrong in being a total human trash. He gained power above his imagination, got kidnapped to another world. Theres no stupid laws that would bind him. So why not play a god?
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  Yada yada he is a human trash, needs to die, oy oy oy, me dislikes this!!! Anti hero needs motivation, needs backstory, needs some tragedy to motivate and argument his anitheroines:) pff
  Dear Sir/Madad grow up and stop being childish.
  "I’ve read story about the mc being a ‘bad guy’ but each time there was some reason (fun, revenge, abuse, madness, …) "
  If I am not mistaken, your signature is Gutts from Berserk, please enlighten me what reasons had Griffith, what where his goals, when his armies of demons(some of his companions that he killed and turned/resurected in another form) decimated/sloughtered cruelly and mindlessly all those innocents? Turned a world into a living madness?
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  I also like those sort of characters. Those types that don't allow others to turn tchem into a floor rag.
  But theres no need to identify with the characters, even more theres no need to cry and curse when a characters becomes nothing more than a tyrant.
  Couse most of us would do the same. Please don't be an angel and say you would be heroic and good fighter of justice. Couse most of us would turn into beasts with so much power.
  So in my humb
• herbin45Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  I feel like you've made him too overpowered too fast and you have not taken into account how the story will proceed. The characters are pretty bland and the main character just acts like a douche cause he has a cheat like power.
  It's pretty decent in general but it would be nice if there could be some improvements in the characters and in the story since it feels like it doesn't know where to go so it just throws some random encounters in.
• wohlzyRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  *SPOILER*
  At first i kinda liked the story, transportation to a new world, handsome and op mc, academy, magic, stats etc.
  but then… i got disgusted with the mc
  2 days since he is in a new world (not counting the 2 he was unconscious) and all he do is acting like a ….. douche? asshole? over-pridefull bastard ? insensitive ?
  he murder, threaten, steal etc etc.
  i mean he is 17 years old living on earth and 2 days after going to another world he just become a sociopath who get in a adventurer guild to do a quest, trash talk the rule the habitant of this world live by and then after monsters attack he just decide to kill all the people in the building by transforming them in human bomb to fight the monster ?
  this mc is a total douche ! i wouldn’t be surprised if he just started bullying students of the academy to get money and started to rape the girls he see then kill them because he is bored.
  i don’t think i would have minded such a disgusting attitude if there was some sort of backstory for the mc or a reason that created hate for humanity or something like that but it seem he was just a good looking ‘genius’ (still have some doubt there) having a normal school life.
  I don’t mind the anti-hero kind of story but here we don’t have what i would call a ‘hero’.
  I’ve read story about the mc being a ‘bad guy’ but each time there was some reason (fun, revenge, abuse, madness, …) and there wasn’t some mindless cruelity that served no goal (it’s what kinda disturbed me)
  I actually would have liked a ‘agressive’ mc you know, angry for being sumoned, bitch slapping the arrogant, killing the thugs, humiliating the bitch, fucking the princess. I love this kind of characters and i get really into it.
  but seeing a character that kill and threaten the weak and innocent for no reason and act like a douche because… i don’t know why. i can’t like this character and i don’t want to identify myself in them.
  still giving half the score because i actually liked the beguining and the mc’s at
• RoXasRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  Well im new for this stuff,so if im have mistake then please forgive me...
  First gramar.
  To be honest its bad,but don't worry im see more novel with gramar that make your head want to explode,so i would suggest you to got editor or proofreader..
  Second character.
  The MC its self is quiet uniqe , if i have say myself but, sometime have a weird personality that make no sense. Maybe MC have some plot in the other world(based in  mc dream) but you make that plot in lastest chapter ,that what make  me confusing (when begining) .
  Third story
  In chapter 4 MC teleport  the anoying student to female bathroom but, in next chapter  the MC say he can't teleport in place he never see.. This what make most confusing in this story.
  Overall
  Ok let's finis this most long comment that im ever write:
  It's not that bad story, belive me im have read more worst story than this, but in future chapter later,take my suggest if you want this novel get 10 or above rank.
  Ps: sory if there  are gramar english is not my native language plus im self taught.
• GibberygoonRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  Ok, so I'll just start off by saying that the MC is... not particularly fleshed out. And it feels like you're dodging fleshing him out with the whole losing past memories thing.
  Second, what the hell is with the sudden sex? I mean, it just sort of happens. Feels incredibly forced.
  Third, its quite obvious you took alot of inspiration from Harry Potter, there are plenty of scenes that are similar to the first HP book.
  Fourth, grammar. It can be rather confusing at times.
• jefferypendragonRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  I started reading your story, but I stopped on the 7th chapter. Your story has pretty bad grammar, and was at points disjointed and was hard to make sense of. Most of your errors I could almost auto correct in my head, but some just seemed to randomly make no sense. You need a pr and an editor. If english is you second language this is actually pretty decent, but it literally gave me a headache, sorry and good luck. >
  /
• gyro2deathRoyal Road

  ★★ 1.5

  I've read some good novels by authors who don't speak english as a primary language. They can actually be pretty good even with the weak grammar and issues with tenses if you can get past them. What you can't get past is just shallow writing that says everything as bluntly as possible. The exposition is told in a dry and dull manner with no effort to weave it into the story.
  The setup isn't bad, it's generic but with enough small things to make me hope for a good story to come from it. Sadly you won't be getting that from this story.