The Adventures of a Unique Snowflake [rewrite in progress]

Self-Published

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Description

This was my first attempt at writing and I am not very proud of it. You're welcome to check it out, but know that it is only still available because someone requested that it stay up.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
SeaGangster

Tags

LITRPGFANTASYADVENTURE

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.1/ 5.0
Followers
257
Views
251,236

Chapters(57 total)

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Community Reviews(8)

  • Who are you neppuRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I took an interest in this story when I was looking for a new story to read in the recently updated. I saw it and thought well this should pass the time. When I started reading the story I was intrigued in the first chapter by the premise. I have now come to thoroughly enjoy the MC and his attitude. Unlike in other novels when he does something like fight a monster I can understand how hard of a fight he's having. His attitude on when things happen to him is about what I think my reaction would be. Overall I enjoy the premise, the characters, and the action. Which is all I can really ask for from a free novel.
  • GrimtreeRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    This story needs a harem!!!😍😍😚😚👺👺👺💋
  • ImMrMeeseeksRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    After reading like 5 chapters and seeing that he didnt drop this I wus very happy/
  • Briar MossRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story flows smoothly and, if a bit fast for my taste, it has a consistency I like. The concepts are novel, the Mc is fleshed out (if naive) and there's a minimum of redundant information.
    I do wish that more time was spent on his lost memories, the moment of clarity explained everything but maybe add that explanation earlier?
    In summary: I like it, it is a simple well done story that does a great job of fleshing out minor characters.
  • KronosthegreatRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    This is an enjoyable read, with an interesting premise that could be somewhat similar to re:monster. This is definitely a good read, with a likable character that has a good sense of humor.
  • wdangoRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Interesting twist on a popular premise. MC background is largely irrelevant so far and character interactions feel scripted, as well as a little bit rushed. Reading this feels like the literary equivalent of a multiple-season TV series compressed into a single movie.
    Improves a little bit in later chapters but could use some more work. Can't say I'm too attached to any of the characters, but I'm interested enough in what happens next to stick around.
    Great worldbuilding, decent foreshadowing.
    Keep writing, SeaGangster! My best tip is to probably try making character interactions a little less heavy-handed.
  • BeyogiRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    I rather liked the idea of this story. The protagonist of an abandoned OP fic gets reincarnated into a world that doesn't care for his mary sueness and punts him back to level one. So far so good. But that's where the problem begins.
    He gets some special ability. In a way he pays dearly for it. He gets the special snowflake ability to evolve in a world where no player can, but also has about the starting stats of a snowflake. And gets his most critical memories removed making him a naive dumbass.
    Pretty funny idea all things considered, but this isn't played for comedy. It's played straight, which is imho the big weakness of this story. Yeah the MC starts out weak, but this is relatively quickly resolved thanks to his evolution ability. Gets a special snowflake familiar, gets a special snowflake magic, gets turned into a special-snowflake not vampire, evolves into an extra-special-snowflake monster.
    I mean sounds funny right? A character named snowflake by vengeful GMs for demanding special snowflake abilities gets ever more special snowflake abilities. The problem is it's not played for laughs but played straight. Making this yet another power leveling LITRPG story. The only difference to others is that the MC had a lower starting point.
    Honestly with the beginning I'd hoped for more.
    The characters feel very generic. I'm not sure if that's intentional, considering the worldbuilding idea of dumping heros from bad and/or aborted fiction into a LITRPG world. But that makes the character interaction not very appealing and I found myself mostly waiting for the next ability upgrade or evolution. Which was admittedly pretty well done.
    There's a lot of mysteries in the background going on for the character to discover, and it's imho the strongest part of the story, but it feels a bit pointless. Like he's going to evolve out of his problems anyway. Or they're going to stop mattering once he hits level 2 and likely gets dumped into a sci-fi LITRPG.
    I think that's my main pr
  • MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    I am honestly disgusted here...
    The story had a ton of potential, liked the buildup and everything.
    Then you go and take the OP MC who is intelligent and strong enough to literally
    tear reality a new one.
    And then you go and have him be so stupid and gullible to that he is manipulated by just about every character....
    Is the author a well read pre-pubescent child? Because the story is well written, just badly.