The adventures of a disowned duke's daughter

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Description

Well, what I have to say?

Things can go worst?......yes

But still, this is very strange, I was only playing an otome game and go to sleep.

The next time I woke up, I changed.

Handsome noble?, charming prince?, a butler serving someone?, even a no face character would be great, or better, a simple commoner living his life working his field.

But no, I am one of these characters that was part of the story, I am the villainess and love rival of the heroin, the person who blocks the way for the heroin and the prince, but not in thi-.................

Hey!, the person who write this line forgot that I am a guy!

I will not live as a noble and have a family with another man!

Who cares that all other famous novels do it!?

No, no, nonononononon.

Goodbye, I am out, have a good life, but I am not going to do that, I will go with the story and live my life as a disowned daughter and will do my things in this world of magic, I will close the door.

“THUD!”

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Maxmech

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Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
125
Views
35,443

Chapters(16 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

  • Undead WriterRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    It has a good start.  You need an english speaking editor for sure but other than that I can understand what you are saying.  It has a good idea and I look forward to seeing where this goes.  I hope this MC is as OP as I think she is.
  • MelcontentRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Basically a buff guy from Arizona is put into the body of a little girl's body in light novel game.
    One of the main problems that I have is the grammar and that that the author is writing it like a Japanese light novel.
    I feel that the MC could have been doing something else for the first ten years of her life, building connections, attempting to kill the main heroine. Just something.
    The chapters are short, he uses "..." You know the drill.
    I would recommend reading this when the author can be bothered doing a rewrite and an edit.
  • claws8367Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    Here's the thing: get a editor. Have yet to see a translator or fanfiction author do this kinda storry the right way. But i can't get past the prologue without getting confused about some sentences.. it really breaks the immersion...