The adventourus healer [HIATUS]

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Description

Su Ming is born to a second life in a fantasy realm. No one and nothing gives him any reason or goal. Su Ming is a gentle and modern man, so he hides for the first ten years. While trying to learn about the world, he grows to love his family and friends. When he finds the opportunity to cultivate his spirit of adventure reignites, and he begins to look for opportunities to help.

I am working on a rewrite of the story.

The picture is named "Spirited Away" by SeerLight and published on DeviantArt.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2018
Author
Goldfrep

Tags

FANTASYADVENTUREDRAMAMALE LEADREINCARNATION

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.7/ 5.0
Followers
127
Views
55,626

Chapters(36 total)

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Community Reviews(6)

  • S_k_yRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    The story has really specific humor and subtle jokes which not many will likey understand. But if you happen to be one of them (And you do not care much about grammar) you will have fun.
  • NasorrenRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    The premise of the story looked pretty interesting about a healer who is not an front line adventuror.
    But the grammar and styling has to be imported. Moreover, there are way too many characters and not enough impact to remember them. Even the author seems to forget the names of the characters at times.
  • WillyHRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Title said adventure. But the story more like drama and slice of live. I think slow life of healer/reincarnator more fit. The story just average,with slow building story and no action. Some reader like this kind of story but not me. Sorry🙏
  • loveribbonRoyal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    8 chapters in and the story has been going nowhere, not to mention that getting through that many chapters with this terrible structuring is more of a heroic act than anything our "hero" has gone through thus far.
    Spoiler
    The only things that has happened is for the main character to build a mill, and constantly remind the reader of how many girls chase him, with maybe a bit of magic thrown in randomly. The bit of magic that is shown is the main character forming some kind of cult around his powers, and beginning to feel a bit almighty about his small home village worshipping him, so that's nice.
    Bad grammar can be forgivable, but a story that promises magic and character growth only delivering a pretentious ass of a character, that's just rude.
  • GinzoRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    Spelling error in the title alone, god knows why this piece of shit is trending.
  • rusticsoldierRoyal Road
    ★ 0.5
    I got to chapter 20. And it turned into a detailed story of massaging other men while getting them off..I love healer stories but this was just disgusting. It should have a gay man tag on it.. The spelling not great. The story itself was slow before getting to chapter 20 several times I thought of just dropping it however I stuck with it because it was a healer character.
    Not sure where the authors from but many jokes feel like Filipino humor I came across region specific or inn jokes.
    There are some bad stories on here. And ill chug through them. But this was not a rewarding story.