The Accidental Liberator (ASOIAF,GOT SI)

Self-Published

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Description

A man finds himself inexplicably transported to Essos, armed with powers he cannot comprehend. He plans to exploit his newfound abilities to lead a life of leisure and excess in this very familiar realm.

But instead he becomes entangled in the chaos of Dothraki raids, slave revolts,forming a new nation and even the unintended emergence of a religion centered around him.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Illusive0ne

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.1/ 5.0
Followers: 110
Views: 28,352

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

D3nCoruRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Okay so I binged through this pretty quick, I'd say it's a pretty good around story. Character are decently fleshed out with how early this story is, Grammer is good haven't seen any problems. Stories moving at a good pace, honestly nothing to complain about, overall a good start 4.5/5.
P.S. One problem, there's not enough 😭😭😭
Nyarlathotep FlaggRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
Looks great and fairly realistic so far. A random guy suddenly thrown into the middle of nowhere in ASOIAF/GOT and gaining great magical powers, would most likely not immediately start focusing on doing the right thing, but rather choose to enjoy the benefits - And not consider how his powers might affect their world.
Grammar is generally quite good, but there was a few misses here and there. Nothing that should make it all that hard to read though. At most you'd have to do a double take on some snag once a chapter or so.
Still not sure what exact power he has though. I'm guessing it's CYOA based, rather than being based on The Force as he first thought. A lot of these powers seem rather unrelated to The Force. And The Dark Side does not really seem to be calling to him.
There seems to be a lot of new plot twists added with this latest chapter, based on his magic reawakening the magic of the world much too soon for the plans of the inhabitants.
If there was one great critique I would have, it would be that the story at this point, seems a tad directionless, and although challenges seem to loom - It has mostly only displayed introduction and wish fulfillment so far, while moving a bit fast for being so early on, meaning it will have to start slowing down soon without stalling. Which is a daunting task to handle well as an author. But I think this has great potential at this stage, and can still turn out idyllic.