The Accidental Immortal Warrior

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2016

Author

Armoredfrost

• Chapter 14 so you want to spar huh?
  May 21, 2016
• Chapter 13 all the basics and then some old man
  May 19, 2016
• Chapter 12 time for bathing and debreifing
  May 17, 2016
• Chapter 11 whats that smell
  May 16, 2016
• Chapter 10 is the Saber or the spear more suicidal you decide
  May 15, 2016
• Chapter 9 Learning where the pointy end is lmao
  May 14, 2016
• Chapter 8 an old mans thoughts of the past
  May 13, 2016
• Chapter 7 time to get the rest of body cultivation done
  May 13, 2016
• Rank class info dump
  May 13, 2016
• Chapter 6 About bloody time the chores are done
  May 12, 2016
• sorry guys
  May 9, 2016
• Chapter 5 I think weapons are fun
  May 6, 2016
• Chapter 4 its time to get some new clothes
  May 5, 2016
• Chapter 3 time to sell the goods
  May 4, 2016
• methados world info dumps hope to not make you guys sad its not another chapter.
  May 4, 2016
• Chapter 2 Time to go see a wolf about him killing me
  May 4, 2016
• Chapter 1 Oh shit new world
  May 4, 2016
• The end is near but is it also the beginning
  May 3, 2016

Reviews

Community Reviews(3)

• wraith26Royal Road

  ★★★ 3.0

  concept=good
  granmar =barely readable.. im confused about something even right now...
  style=not good.. i dunno.. not bad..
  character?  .. mc is dull... maybe because of the grammar
• DiamonFTWRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  So… I just read the… Whatever it’s called. Anyways, doesn’t matter. The problem though… Here:
  what happens when the mission your is your last where will I go will I get my heavenly ending. well read and see where are poor main character will land.
  Here’s the probelms.
  1.) The very first sentence has two different point of views. The first half is in second person, the second half is in first person…
  If you don’t know what that means, I’m saying that using you, your in a sentence, such as:
  You walked two steps forward and fell.
  This is in second person as it is describing the actions of someone else, I’m not describing this well. But in grammar, please stick with one perspective. It doesn’t help when you switch from one perspective, and switch to first.
  The reason wrong with this sentence, is you smashed two different clauses into one sentence, without any break. This is usually a run on, in some terms in grammar. But anyways, smashing two clauses doesn’t make it all well and good. The very first sentence would have to be split into two sentences.
  As I will assume that english isn’t your first language, I’m not dissuading you in writing. But if you write something and want to improve, but the people who want to help you can’t help simply for the fact that they can’t pick out the general idea. Doesn’t help anyone. I’d like to help, but then again, do I really want to?
  Anyways. The grammar is just that bad. And damn, this is a long rant on one sentence.
  Parasitic Overlord signing out.
  Oh yeah, keep writing, I assume practise makes perfect.
  And RRL, how did I spell practise wrong, what?
  Nevermind.
  Edit:
  Alright, I may have been a bit harsh. The updates are quite frequent as I can see so far, I think the length is… Fine, I suppose, but. BUT, Author-sama, I beg of you, just use 12 or 13 size font, I am 75% sure that 12 size font wouldn’t be too big. But yeah. Edit as of 5/17/16.
  And damn, my review makes no sense whatsoever.
  what happens to you to all your dreams and hope
• DevilAsuraRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  sorry but i thought i was drunk when i read that prolouge :S
  Maybe you should first find someone who can help you with the grammar.