Thadeus' Rising

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Description

In a universe where divine beings have forsaken their duties and rule with unchecked power, a mere human floats in the cold vacuum of space among planetary debris after the planet he inhabited exploded, when he hears a voice calling out as he loses consciousness. Awakening as an angel, he begins to ascend through the ranks, only to quickly discover the kingdom's deep-rooted corruption. Faced with moral dilemmas, battles and seductive temptations, he must decide: will he succumb to the same darkness that corrupts his peers, or will he resist and try to overthrow the tyrannical ruler and his high ranking angels?

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: PlatonicDuoX

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Rating: 2.5/ 5.0
Followers: 4
Views: 2,312

Chapters(16 total)

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DrakoRemRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
i don’t really understand the authors who rush and don’t take a little time and generate an image for the book cover. It’s 2024. You don’t want to pay to have somebody do your cover? Great! Use an AI. But here we don’t even have a title. It tells me two things. Either the author just started on the story and doesn’t even have its structure or that the author is lazy. I don’t even know which one is worse.
Now to the story. The style irks me. The story has to be precise. For example they’re a sentence containing something like “alway mostly”. Which one is it though. And there are more sentences containing similarly confusing pairings. The wording is off. The leasing needs work. I feel the author didn’t really edit his work.
About the plot/story, it didn’t really hook me but it’s too early to say. Just got me thinking how anybody could survive an exploding planet. Was he in the planet? Was he an astronaut in orbit?
The character. Didn’t leave an impression on me.
Overall, it’s too early to say anything. I decided to read the first chapter because it is unacceptable to post a story without as much as a title.
to the author. If you’ll fix the issues , you can contact me and I’ll edit the review accordingly.