Terror Infinity-A new terror
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Want to know the meaning of life? Want to live... a real life?That is the message that Chris gets one day at school and in his despair over the bully's and teachers not listening to him he hits yes. Will he be able to survive what he got himself into.This is my own take to the original Terror Infinity and Terror Infinity - side Band my first attempt at a fanfic enjoy
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Bloodlust
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 152
- Views
- 258,352
Chapters(66 total)
- QuestenSep 3, 2018
- NewsAug 10, 2018
- Ch:59 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission – 6Aug 9, 2018
- Ch:58 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission – 5Aug 8, 2018
- Ch:57 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission - 4Aug 7, 2018
- Ch:56 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission-3Aug 5, 2018
- Ch:55 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission-2Aug 4, 2018
- Ch:54 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic Intermission-1Aug 4, 2018
- Ch:53 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 5-FinalAug 3, 2018
- Ch:52 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 5-1Aug 2, 2018
- Ch:51 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 4-2Aug 1, 2018
- Ch:50 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 4-1Jul 30, 2018
- Ch:49 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 3-3Jul 30, 2018
- Ch:48 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 3-2Jul 29, 2018
- Ch:47 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 3-1Jul 28, 2018
- Ch:46 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 2-2Jul 27, 2018
- Ch:45 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 2-1Jul 26, 2018
- Ch:44 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 1-2Jul 25, 2018
- Ch:43 – Magi the Labyrinth of Magic – 1-1Jul 24, 2018
- Heads up!Apr 28, 2016
Reviews
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Community Reviews(6)
- Dream45Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0is ok , the author is improving a lot and thats good, waiting for more :D
- DAO master of the rockRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5only 4 and a half because there were some errors and things that just did not make sense but rarely happen so i can ignore them good story overall though keep up the good work
- WellsfordRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0Always happy to see a Terror Infinity FF. Needs proofreader, but the story still shines through.
- zlightning123Royal Road★★★★ 3.5Overall the story is great. The characters are all original and aren’t copied from the original terror infinity or the other terror infinity fanfics. Furthermore the story is thrilling and makes you want to read more. The only real problem I have with your story is your use of grammar particularly when it comes to numbers. There are many spelling, grammatical, and numerical errors but what is most confusing is your misuse of the customary system of measurement when describing your characters. According to your descriptions, everyone in your story are basically really tall or really short. I don’t know if this is because you don’t understand the actual system of lengths that make up the customary system due to the fact that you may be from a country that only uses the metric system or whether these numbers are the results of not paying attention while writing. There are also other times where you give the wrong numbers for things such as how many man mission their mission is or how many points or rank rewards the mc received. All of these errors make it harder to correctly picture your characters and understand the plot of your story. Overall though, I really like your story.
- AscendantRoyal Road★★ 2.0honestly i couldnt get past the very obvious speeling and grammar mistakes it detracts from the whole experience.
- CruxioRoyal Road★ 0.5I would have written a longer review but i accidentally refreshed the tab and dont want to even bother to rewrite it because this story is crap. so i will just go by the advance review
Style - 0.5 unoriginal, crappy, short, didn't even gave an effort to balance/clean the story
Story - can i give 0? Because i dont think i can give you credit for this story since it is 90% copy pasted and the remaining 10% is for the storyline of your chosen manga.
Grammar- Terrible. Didn't even give it a second look for proofreading
Character- Cliche, dumb, undeveloped. Those poor bastards are like puppets. Didn't even had a single character building. It was so bad that even if you changed the character's names it wouldn't matter because they are all template characters. I could have named your MC Ryu or Yuuji and it wouldn't even change anything.