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★★★★ 4.0
The story starts out pretty good, has a quick premise as to how the character got to where she is that really built up a good momentum.
But after that we don't really get anything, she is just introduced, no she self introduced herself to have been reborn and thats it.
At the same time she is introduced we are told she has a system, so we don't have to guess how her cultivation journey will be, as anyone with a system will succeed even if the system is against them.
Thats the basic premise of systems, all of the success none of the hardship.
So far the story is progressing rapidly, from a baby to a princess to joining the sect in that order.
The characters so far have all been quickly introduced but for some reason they are very easy to follow, you won't have to guess the motives or actions of the characters because they will tell you themselves.
I see that as a positive so far as the chapters are short, these quick introductions save's time and moves the story.
Where the story is lacking so far is in the main character herself, she is just going through the motions with no real motive for us to see.
Well no thats not right, we are told she wants to rule above everyone and so she will do it.
Why she wants to rule we will have to see in future chapters I'm guessing.
Grammar is not so great. There are several areas that a quick read over would have made one think "Oh I should probably fix that" that are clear as day to see.
Some sentences feel unfinished while other ones feel like something was deleted by mistake.
Overall its an enjoyable quick read, but it lacking motivation.

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