Temporal Echoes: A Reverend Insanity Fanfic

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Status

Hiatus

Author

Duke of Shards

Reviews

Community Reviews(5)

• LokordaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Temporal Echoes is a great example of a well-written fanfiction. I personally believe that the prose, and the Author's verbosity, add to the story instead of detracting from it. This is very obviously not in the realm of MTL novels and is in fact an example of stellar grammar and spelling.
  The only potential problem I see is that of future plot points. Reverend Insanity leaves some pretty big shoes to fill and the plot seemed relatively complete from a reading perspective. I can't imagine what could be added to make things different outside of minimal modification to the Original Plot but that's why I'm not writing an RI fanfiction.
  One part I wanted to ask about was the minimal mention of the two (?) time-travel events that Fang Yuan has experienced. It is brought up when needed by the plot and I can see that the third-person limited writing style the Author employs doesn't lend itself to the kind of introspective monologuing I find enjoyable on occasion. But is the focus of the story on current plot and not his thoughts about plans to combat his future foes not detracting a little bit from the immersion and character of Fang Yuan?
  I love where things are going but it does seem to me that Fang Yuan is a little too perfect in his execution of planned events. The problem isn't what he's doing but in the thought process explained to us. Fang Yuan is scheming and smart and someone who definitely makes far-reaching plans when he has information available to him. In this case he has the ultimate information advantage and none of his plans are explained to the reader. If this is intentionally done to provide mystery then it doesn't really seem necessary because of the fact that, at minimum, RI's first 'volume' has a couple of plot points that are necessary and so make any sort of mystery meaningless. (Unless that isn't the case?)
  If this is just me overanalysing 17 chapters of a fanfiction that is just beginning to hit its stride then feel free to ignore me and keep writi
• Mr.A 4432Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  "This is one of the Reverend Insanity fanfics where Fang Yuan, after being on the brink of death during his second regression, manages to return to the past once again with his Supreme Path attainment. Hope Gu accompanies him, adding to the story's potential. Fang Yuan possesses all his previous knowledge and knows who his real enemies are, which makes the storyline intriguing.
  The grammar is generally good, with only minor mistakes that the author promptly corrects when notified. Please inform the author politely if you come across any grammatical errors.
  The characters are well-developed and stay true to their original personalities without any noticeable flaws. I commend the author for writing them effectively.
  The story is relatively good. After all, this is Reverend Insanity, and its fanfics always have huge potential when written well. The author has a knack for making you want to read more with its good details and the dark mood that surrounds the story. It will definitely pull you in for more.
  I suggest disregarding the other review, as it appears to be unfounded and unrelated to the actual story."
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• ShadowOfDemiseRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Don't listen to the idiot who left a 0.5 star review.
  The nudity involves fang zhen not fang yuan you bumbling fool.
  Its fanfiction so it will obviously take liberties with some stuff otherwise what even is the point of writing if it is the same thing as the original story.
  If you don't like poems or simply lack intellectual capacity to appreciate them like a fool who left a 0.5 stars then yeah STFU and piss off.
  Author bro keep writing cause this is some good shit👍.
• Weary_WandererRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  This is the story I've been waiting for. Some might complain it does the MC a disservice to make him overpowered, but they fail to understand what the MC would fully take advantage of such an opportunity. They even keep the MC in character without making him needlessly OC. I can't wait for more Senior Brother. Also if you feel like others are putting you down, you must preserve to reach your goals!
• prakashchaupr4aRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  If you are a fan of Reverend Insanity, you will love Temporal Echoes. This fanfic is a brilliant continuation of the original story, following Fang Yuan's journey as he travels back in time to the day before the Awakening Ceremony, once again. With his vast knowledge and experience, he faces new challenges and opportunities, as well as old enemies and allies, in his quest to become the strongest Gu Master in history.
  Temporal Echoes is a captivating and immersive read that will keep you on the edge of your seat. The author skillfully blends the essence of Reverend Insanity with his own creative twists, creating a unique and compelling narrative that stays true to the spirit of the original work. The fanfic explores themes such as fate, morality, power, and ambition, through the eyes of Fang Yuan, a complex and multifaceted protagonist who defies conventional norms and expectations. This story illustrates well both his cunning and his humanity. You will be amazed by his cunning schemes, ruthless actions, and indomitable will, as he manipulates the threads of destiny to his advantage.
  The fanfic also features vivid descriptions, dynamic dialogues, and exhilarating battles that will make you feel like you are part of the Gu world. The author pays attention to details and consistency, creating a rich and realistic setting that is faithful to the original work. The fanfic also introduces new characters and plots that add depth and diversity to the story, while maintaining coherence and continuity with the original work. The fanfic is updated regularly and has high-quality writing that is easy to read and follow.
  Temporal Echoes is a must-read for all Reverend Insanity fans, as well as anyone who enjoys a well-written and engaging fantasy story with a dark and anti-heroic twist. This fanfic will take you on an unforgettable adventure that will leave you breathless and wanting more. Don't miss this opportunity to witness Fang Yuan's epic journey as he reshapes his destiny