Telesma

Self-Published

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Description

An immortal being who has existed ever since the very first breath of creation decided to assume a human form and descend down to the mortal plane in the attempt to observe humans and experience their society first hand for his entertainment purposes. Unbeknownst to him, chaos has been stirring up both in the cosmos and in the earthen plane below which will bring about a catastrophe that will affect the fate of all of the planes of existence. With a tremendous amount of power far greater than what his physical body can handle, how will he fare himself with keeping his identity hidden all the while being right in the middle of the ensuing maelstrom?

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Drachma

Tags

ACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICMALE LEAD

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.7/ 5.0
Followers
5
Views
7,097

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • Moist NuggetRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    The story so far is fantastic,  while the grammar is top notch.
    My only problem is how fast things are going. The plot isn't cemented yet, so one second he finds the people who were experimented on, and the next he's already attacking another base and finding something that shouldn't exist. All of this in 5 chapters is sanic levels of speed.
    Since it's moving too fast, the character development is almost non-existant. We simply can't make an accurate judgment from what we have.
    Keep going, Author, just slow down please.