Technomagic Empire Of The Apocalypse
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After the multiverse merged into one single megaverse a period of chaos and death ensued, all intelligent life would have been wiped out if not for a sacrifice that sent people back in time, giving them a second chance to survive.
Vance has a plan, has the resources and is better suited for ruling instead of lone wolfing, therefore he will assemble his followers and build a stronghold to resist the apocalypse, first a bunker, then a fortress, then a kingdom, then an empire.
A power fantasy set in a steampunk magic world.
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- Status
- Hiatus
- Author
- hakatri gin
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- Rating
- 3.6/ 5.0
- Followers
- 150
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Community Reviews(6)
- Mark TimeRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0good start! The story structure is good.
Heavy focus on kingdom building and RPG elements. The story starts to feel like mad max and the walking dead crossed with magic.
The grammar requires you to not care about paragraph structure and to be able to place your own sentence structure mentally to truly enjoy.
ps it's still better than translated light novels - MullayoRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0I was asked to check this out and wasn't expecting too much, but I must say what a premise!
It's not post apocalyptic it's pre apocolyptic... The world we all live in - just the MC has the actual dates and memeries of what happens in the future...
What would you do with a week left till the world fell apart? When values changed overnight. the precious becoming trash and vice versa?
Who would you save? Would they even listen to you? Such and interesting what if...
I'm only three chapters in but I'm intrigued... - cthakur92Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Loved it. It could use editing, but personally I liked the story enough to ignore the long lines and grammer issues. Proof is in the pudding. Reading first 2 chapters should be enough to let you know if this story is for you.
- NiurnRoyal Road★★ 1.5This work badly needs editing. Each paragraph is a single sentence running for dozens of words. I couldn't get past chapter 3.
Spoiler: Here's an example from Ch1 :
The construction team was almost leaving when a big, big trailer arrived, on its platform there were an old locomotive, a small tractor and several wheels and tires of all sizes, the delivery men used the tractor to help drag down the locomotive and left the tractor and tires, Vance tried to get his hands on a steam engine but most of them were small models for use as wood powered electricity generation so he settled for buying some old locomotive engines, once the cash was rolling it was rather easy after the initial historical concerns used to drive the price up. - th30dorRoyal Road★ 1.0It's very hard to read. The writing, and grammar are atrocious. This needs an editor really badly.
- diego duqueRoyal Road★ 0.5Good story, you just need some polishing.
Besides, it has a great world and character construction, the only complaint or advice I will give would be: given that the magic forced the technological worlds to reinvent itself, it would be logical that the magical worlds with the arrival of the fusion also had to reinvent their magical systems to adapt to changes in magic, otherwise it would not make sense that after the catastrophe everything would remain the same.