Tales of The Taken
Self-Published
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Description
As the clock rolled over to twelve AM, Jepser jumped out of bed as he heard the voice,"restration complete, scanning genetic strength: unknown, analyzing physical health, rated F-, potential rating among other registers: 1/ 1,000,000,000 Teleporting to start zone." and then blackness
At this time, exactly one billion heard this voice coming from there own head, and then vanished as if they never existed
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2022
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 999
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- 1Royal Road★★★★ 4.0This concept is often used but still good, taking the most prospective members of a species and forcing them to battle it out to see who reigns supreme through strength or cunning. I thought there were a few capitalization issues that disrupted the story slightly, but in general the syntax was fine. My main problem is that the character isn't very compelling or likeable, but hopefully some exposition changes this in the future.