Tales of Mana

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Announcement: I (the author) am currently on a journey through guides, feedback and countless pages of miscellaneous other stuff to improve this work. I will not change the plot, but the style should be improved by a lot. I also intend to give more insights on the world and its characters. Once that is taken care of, this message will be removed. Until then, I wish you keep this in mind if you keep reading. - You know the stories about how some random person get's resurrected as the hero of a fantasy world after dying in their previous one? Well.. Mana may have been revived, but definitely not as a hero. This world does not require to be saved. It has to be changed. However.. how much can something be bent.. before breaking? - Mature tag due to: description of gory scenes. Some violence. This will go down after the first few chapters, but will resurface later on. Example: """"had literally drowned on its own blood"""". No sx scenes. To get some things out of the way: -this is my first submission, and the first story I ever wrote. If you find mistakes, or have something to criticize, please do so, but DON'T just write """"xy = bad"""". Explain me how to improve. Would be nice.

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Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: CCDCC

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Rating: 3.7/ 5.0
Followers: 260
Views: 56,130

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Community Reviews(3)

DeaDzNaKORoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
First the style- I like your style, not too heavy not too light, great for anyone who wants to take a break from reading all those intense stuff from other fics.
Story- it's great so far, buuut, you could've paid more attention on your first chapter. Most people judge the book by it's first chapter if there's no cover.
Grammar- I'm no grammar Nazi, but I can honestly say I'm not having a hard time understanding your grammar nor did I notice wrong spellings or typos so it's fine.
Character- The main character is great, at least he's not a narcissist so far. There's a bit of problem though, since he's got no clear background it's pretty hard to understand his actions, reactions, and goals.
OVERALL I find the story engaging, interesting aaaand yes!, FRESH. Something new is always welcome in my book. Keep up the good work.
P.S.
His host body feels like a side character rather than a support character, I'm not a good author but that's what I feel about the story. The new arrival (Help) gives a more dynamic vibe than the host body...
GiantSlugRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It is not the best rewrite, but I see that you are trying for better.Although you are nowhere near the 5 star review i will give it for taking into consideration my opinion.
madmatthew200Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
before the re-write this story was good 4.5 stars at least the re-write kills the story it just doesnt feel the same in a bad way
2 and a half in honour of the old story