Systemized Broodmother

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I was only a Bookie for a seedy race horse track. While speaking with one of the racers, their horse has gone into an uncontrolled frenzy as it ran me down and attacked. Buzzing noise and distant screaming is my only connection to the outside world. As my vision went black, with a bleeding head wound. It was only a few moments later that everything stopped. A warmth unlike anything encapsulates me. A sensation unlike anything before washes over me. Before I can adjust. A bright blue box blinds me. Written on it “Welcome to Expira”

Chapters(5 total)

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  • DBoyBluesRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The author is active, and the story has an interesting premise. It's a bit shaky of a start, but it seems this is the author's second work, so fair is fair. I genuinely think this has potential and hope to see it continue, so I'll be optimistic. Please keep it up author, and Goodluck :)
    Edit: Author does not seem active. 2 months at time of edit with no updates. Fair is fair, I  leave my review and hope the author has a chance to continue this story once they settle with whatever personal or writer related setbacks they may be having.