System Beginning

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Description

Dying was just the start of Jace Obexis’s journey. Reborn into a world of magic, noble intrigue, and dungeon exploration, he awakens  a rare and mysterious ability—theSystem. With its power, he can see what others can’t, grow stronger at an unprecedented rate, and choose any path he desires.

Armed with arcane magic, a combat style no one expects, and a mind sharpened by experience in this world and the last, Jace quickly finds himself at the center of royal schemes, rivalries, and the looming threats. With every sparring match, dungeon dive, and strategic gamble, he edges closer to uncovering the true potential of his power—if he can survive long enough to use it.

For fans ofLitRPG, magic academies, and unstoppable underdogs,System Beginningis a fast-paced adventure filled with tactical combat, powerful abilities, and a protagonist who plays by his own rules.Step into the System—where strength is earned, and legends are forged.

"I, the author of this story, do not consent to the reproduction, use, or distribution of this content by others without explicit written permission. This includes but is not limited to adaptations, derivative works, or sharing on any platform. All rights are reserved."

Information

Status
Ongoing
Year
2025
Author
acexe

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTURECOMEDYSTRONG LEADMALE LEADHIGH FANTASY

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Rating
4.4/ 5.0
Followers
1,009
Views
33,042

Chapters(5 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • gc1068Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    i didn't think that I was going to be as interested in this book as i find myself being. I am waiting to see more from this author. Book sounds like there is going to be plenty of future content to move forward on and expand. Hopefully the author keeps going and continues to write in this series and does not leave me hanging.
  • CabargsleyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I have been enjoying the book so far. It seems interesting and has kept me engaged so far. I do hope the book continues and keeps up with the release rate. I am a fan of the first person narrative as well, I have read a few books that way and find I enjoy it.
    I have an update, the story so far has been pretty interesting, it has some interesting choices and it has been fun to read. I enjoy that the author is not just rushing to climactic event after climactic event. Those can be fun but this makes me feel they are setting up for the long haul.
    There has been a few errors with the grammar but it seems they fix it quickly. I am interested to see what happens when it is professionally edited.
    Overall the I have been enjoying the story and I can’t wait to see what happens next. I hope that the author doesn’t drop the story like so many have in the past. Again though, it feels like they are setting up for the long haul so I I am not too worried about it.
    I do hope that there are some climactic events coming soon, but it feels like it’s about to happen.
  • Hurley007Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The story keeps your attention and builds continuously. Great MC who never fails to deliver but not all powerful. Solid supporting cast with characters growing around the MC. Lots of excitement and a great new take from the standard litrpg arena. If you enjoy a story that keeps you entertained and engaged while surprising you with changes in both settings and direction, you will enjoy this story.
  • TdubbzRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Enjoying it very much so far. I have only gotten through the first 3 chapters right now, but it is grabbing my attention and I am looking forward to digging in to the next chapter. For a first time writer I am impressed and think the story itself has potential.
  • Timothyblackjr1Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    I love when it’s hard not to skip ahead to see what happens. Having to tell myself to slow down and enjoy the journey when I’m just excited to see what happens is the sign of a great book. I also love when books flow naturally from one chapter to the next. Especially when time jumps are taken into account. I’ve read quite a few books where I had to go back and read it again because it feels like I missed something. I’m glad I don’t have to do that here.
  • VerionRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The start of the book is a little slow, however it seems to be for a good reason. I get the feeling there is more going on in the background that the author is trying to set up.
    As for the style, I find I enjoy the first person with an occasional different POV. I don't like a lot of POV change but considering it has only happened once so far I do not feel that it will be happening too much. Writing in the first person perspective allows me to feel like I am apart of the story and I enjoy that.
    The grammar has been pretty good so far nothing that has stood out too much. From what it seems like the author has been doing their own editing as they write and have done a fairly good job. I personally do not expect perfect editing done in a situation like this.
    Each character has a unique feel to them. I like when the author has people in the story who are not just the same. I do hope that the author keeps up with the characters and we can learn more about them.
    Overall I hope the author continues the story as I have enjoyed reading it quite a bit. I am looking forward to what comes next and if the author is to be believed, I hope that we get to see some interesting things happening within the next few chapters.
    Thank you for your hard work!
  • ThjalfiRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I like the story as it is, but some plot developments are kinda obvious.
    The protagonist has (for me) a bit too much plot armor and main character energy - changes to fast in his favor.
    But overall a solid story!
    (Reading ahead on Patreon - english is not my main language)
  • Rivaya sRoyal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    The main character isn’t skilled with a sword, yet refuses to consider using any other weapons. The plot feels incredibly cliché, like I’ve read the exact same story hundreds of times, with no fresh ideas or creativity. At least other stories that have the same plot are interesting, but this story is really boring. The constant tense shifts in the writing are also quite frustrating.
  • C_WRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    The story started well enough but as the story goes on it progressively went down hill.
    The story is very rushed.
    Mc is given super OP powers. Send him into a few progressively stronger dungeons and soon he would be a God.
    10 year Olds acting like adults.
    10 year old Mc who is really a 40 year old military veteran who just starts revealing his secrets for no real good reason at all.
    The writing is decent but pretty much every chapter there is an "ugh seriously" moment or more than one.
    At this point I'm probably done. Might come back and see if it gets better later.
  • Hadeez21Royal Road
    ★★ 1.5
    Plot is your typical MC with a system. Would've been nice and could give a bit of uniqueness to the story if it has been executed well. Dropping it at this chapter because MC is full of contradictions, keeps saying he needs to keep things a secret but keeps doing questionable things that can expose his secret. MC is also going in an academy for 10 year olds, now when did you ever see a 10 year old that has gone through their puberty if they are bog standard human? One of the side characters, a schoolmate was described as someone standing at 5'9 at height. Me personally have never seen a 10 year old at 5'9. MC's sister has a small POV part that says intelligence not belonging to a 5 year old. I think this is Author's first time writing so this could just be due to inexperience but I've gotten use to reading things that would not give me the need to turn my brain off. You need to be able to do that to avoid questioning the tiny details in this story. Rating this 1.5 stars as the author and the story has potential its just not in this particular story