Sweet Pain

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Ashen’s life in the quiet town of Vallendel is everything a man could hope for—peaceful, with a devoted wife, a bright-eyed daughter, and the simple joys of life. In a world where magic is more curse than blessing, its power is claimed through unspeakable suffering—something Ashen has never needed or wanted.

When tragedy shatters his peaceful life, Ashen is thrust onto a path where strength is forged in suffering and revenge is his only solace. In a world where pain is the price of power, he must endure horrors that threaten to strip him of everything he once was.

But deep within a long-forgotten civilization, Ashen uncovers a hidden secret—an ancient, mechanical soul bound to the remains of lost technology, offering him unimaginable abilities. As he learns with the help of the system, it becomes clear that this force is no ordinary power, and its guidance is his only hope for revenge.

How much can a man endure before he breaks? As Ashen’s journey unfolds, the gap between the man he was and the monster he is becoming widens, forcing him to question what it means to be human—and what he’s willing to sacrifice to reshape his destiny and destroy those who wronged him.

Chapters(9 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • ProfMilumRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Ich muss sagen: Chapeau! Das erste Kapitel hat mir wirklich ausgezeichnet gefallen. Die Gefühle, die in der Szene transportiert werden, sind sehr nahbar und lassen den Leser in die Gedanken des Protagonisten eintauchen. Der Schreibstil trägt enorm dazu bei. Insgesamt hat das erste Kapitel meine Neugier auf die Fortsetzung definitiv geweckt! Der Cliffhanger am Ende ist fast schon gemein, aber das zeigt nur, dass du als Autor alles richtig gemacht hast. Ich freue mich schon auf das zweite Kapitel! 😉