Suttomo, El renacer de un clan. (Español)
Self-Published
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Description
La historia se sitúa cuando una niña se encuentra con un zorro blanco atrapado en una trampa de un cazador, la niña rescatada al zorro en el momento en que está libre una luz envuelve a la niña y una voz de una mujer le llega a sus oídos .
Ven y disfruta esta historia que está a punto de comenzar.
(Soy un principiante y estoy iniciando mi primera historia, espero que el mar de su agrado)
Nota:
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Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- DarkAngelJubey
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 2.1/ 5.0
- Followers
- 3
- Views
- 4,597
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- NerodithRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5First time reading a story in Spanish, and I surprised myself as I mostly understood everything. So, for those of you are hesitating to read because you aren't fluent in Spanish, just try. It's easier than it seems -as long as you have the basics, obviously (for me, Spanish classes were enough).
Now, for the (very early) review...
Story and Characters
As of now, there are only two chapters, so it's really hard to judge, especially since the chapters are short. But the premise seems good. Then again, I'm a bit biased as I love Kitsunes~ :3
Grammar and style
My spanish is definitely not good enough to be judging the grammar, so it's a five star for me. As for the style, it's okay. Linguistic problems aside, it's easy to read and there is a nice flow to the story. However, the syntax should be revised and the change in POV is quite random so it can be a bit confusing.
Overall, it seems like an interesting story, and I'd love to read more. Good luck to the author !