Surviving This Forsaken World

Self-Published

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Description

"I caused... So much pain..."*********

Two weeks ago, a life changing incident occurred. Seven students specifically were affected the most. A loss of a friend, a comrade, a leader. They're small team was broken, and could never be the same again.

Now, they each must tackle their feelings towards a certain girl, who had no control over that night. And yet had the power to turn their lives upside down forever.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: Writer_Sama12

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.0/ 5.0
Followers: 1
Views: 3,456

Chapters(19 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

Sacred-FireRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
There is a sadness to this story that hides behind the otherwise often happy and funny text. It's clear from the outset that it yearns for a better world, not just for the world the story is set in but for our world.
The style is easy to read and fun, through it has some issues with typos that get a bit distracting sometimes, nothing a good edit run with an experienced editor wouldn't fix up.
There is a rather large cast of characters introduced quickly, but thankfully they are quite memorable, so its easy to follow who is who without getting confused. The build-up of history/myth that is the foundation of the fantasy world was my favourite part so far, its clear that writer_sama has put a lot of work into planning out an interesting and deep world for their characters to inhabit. I'm guessing we will get to learn about these Nymph systers and the disaster that fell on their world more as the story progresses.
Overall im impressed, and happy that I found this story. Keep up the good work!
darkocean (J. L. S.)Royal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Has potential, I kind of liked the prologue it was nice. (I usually don't like proligs much as they never seem to end.)
Consider making a cover or having one made for you You can also ask people to make one in the forms. I make covers too, if you can't find anything you like send a pm or something. (Mine are free.)
Readers will take the story more seriously when you have one, along with lots of chapters. So, keep posting chapers and don't quit! :)