Survive - Terror Infinity Fanfic

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Description

A recently graduated Assassin gets dragged into God's Dimension without being asked. Not that he really minds.

Will his training prove enough to help him through the hells God has decided for them? Or will he crumble under the pressure and let his team down. Who knows, he just knows he's got to survive.

Author Note: I apologize to anyone who would rather have the original of what this book used to be back instead of me using it to prop up a new story of mine but I can't keep making new novels and this was one of the relatively unfollowed ones.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2018
Author: IReadBooksForALiving

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.8/ 5.0
Followers: 155
Views: 35,777

Chapters(17 total)

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Community Reviews(5)

DK SafdarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
More. This Eternal Demands more (red text)
As The Architect, I am embarrassed to say that this is turning me into a fanboy. But this one is one of the better of the author's 'works'
vkg313Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Well written. I hope you continue this!
MC should get over his sensitivity towards women. Seems like a huge problem a competent assassin wouldn't have.
SleepyWriterRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
A bit too short to make a full judgement but it seems promising. I really liked TI, in fact I'm rereading it as we speak so this got me excited. Hopefully it will be complete unlike the other 8 on this site that never got pass 200 pages. It seem at the end of chapter 4 it included an anime power so I wonder where this will take us!
jrazer67Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
This is a mediocre story about the terror infinity universe. The MC, while fitting in with the people you find terror infinity, is one of the more powerful character that I find hard to sympathize with.
Style: The style is shit. This is the main reason for my dislike of this novel. It’s not one of the worse styles on this site, but it’s not really passable. Every other sentence seems to have something that’s wrong with it. It could be there’s too much exposition for what’s going on, or there’s too little, making this story very hard to read.
Story: This is a fanfic, and it does a passable take on the terror infinity universe. I don’t really have any dissatisfaction with what is happening in the story, but it’s a fanfic WITH the main character knowing what he is in. It’s also not a comedy, so this can only lead to ruin.
Grammer: The grammer is great. It’s not on the level of some of the other top fictions on this site, but it’s getting there. The author, while not having a very stable foundation in English flow/style, seems to know a great amount in its grammer. I don’t see any big issues, and even the small issues are just to make the story better.
Character: I have not read far enough into this story (only chap 12) to make a very accurate character analysis. So, I’ll give it a 4.5, because while he seems to be doing a good job on his characterization. There seems to be a focus on the light novel style of how characters are developed, and while this isn’t a bad way to characterize people it just makes most of them shallow and rigid.
While this novel is good enough for me to read it. I would enjoy it so much more, if you were to fix your style to make your sentences flow better. And while I have a few other compliants, those are personal and not worth mentioning in a review.
EliusRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Overall this is a pretty normal Terror Infinity fanfic where the MC is just Dante(white hair, Sparda demon, and all by intermission), an assassin backstory with unexplained but presumably passed on techniques from a former participant, and someone who all women in chapters 1-16 will drop all scraps of characterization to fall for him.
There aren't too many glaring issues with grammar, but a lot of it reads as being very awkward, mostly at the fault of the style and what that style is working with. For example, the author is very, very horny, and if a woman is speaking to him(Takuya), they're either worshipping him or showing off their "assets" in one manner or another.
As exhibit A. the veteran female team member introduced as just a cat girl immediately pins Takuya to a wall and complimented for his looks and goes out of her way to cup her "already bountiful and perky breasts with her arms, further accentuating her bewitching assets." By the third chapter, Mikasa, a martial artist with hands "undeniably soft," massages him in nothing but a towel because he collapsed and somehow learned an enhancement technique. And by intermission, every female on the team is in love with him.
The women on the team aren't the only ones exempt from characterization however, the men of the team got received essentially no characterization whatsoever, the other male newbie he started alongside didn't even get an appearance description, and the male veterans lacked any real interaction. The only characterization male characters did receive was to further emphasize the greatness of Takuya, whether this be cool-headedness or physical strength.
And lastly, because the story plays second-fiddle to Takuya being a badass who all women thirst over, it suffers. There are many interesting ways to establish him being a descendent of former Players and having registered low-ranking martial art based abilities appropriate to his theme on his initial take-to, but instead, he just has unnamed and un