Survival Farming

Self-Published

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Description

So I am in the wilderness on a foreign planet in only my sleeping shirt and underwear. Crap!

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2021

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.8/ 5.0
Followers
13
Views
2,132

Chapters(6 total)

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Community Reviews(1)

  • The Random CatRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    TLDR: A work of a novice writer that is just too young and small to give a proper review on.
    I will be honest here, I do not think 0 pages (235 words)  justify a review. But since a person felt it justified a rating, I am writing this.
    The style until now has been expressive and conveyed the MCs' shock well enough.The only takeaway from it was that the first two sentences were blank statements that didn’t flow well and the rest were also framed similarly. I would suggest that the author rephrase them. I did quite like the way the author showed the characters' reactions, so I hope you keep at it.
    The story is like, not there. It's 235 words now. The Grammar is readable. That sounds rude but it isn't meant to be, there are a few mistakes in grammar and I cannot in good conscience say that it is perfect but it didn't really take much from the story. There was quite a bit of tense confusion though, I think the author is using present tense but there were a few past tense words.
    The length prevented any immersion though. And the Character is also not there. 235 words lol. Characters are the last thing in the book to be clear unless they are one-dimensional. Do give it a read, I quite like the setting and the execution was interesting till now
    THIS IS A FILLER REVIEW THAT WILL BE UPDATED AFTER A DECENT NUMBER OF CHAPTERS ARE POSTED.