Supervillain

Self-Published

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Description

The world is broken and rotten.

It's supposed defenders are too weak willed to do what is necessary.

It's leaders are too corrupt to care for those beneath them

If they wont fix this world, then I will!

I will make the world a better place ..... by any means necessary!

Nice to meet you all. My name is Ginobi47. A lurker of fanfiction.net and now a writer of original fic.This is my first original work and I do hope you enjoy it!

Do remember that this is a fiction in the Superhero genre. Please expect the craziness that goes along with it.

NOTE: English is not my maiden language.

AUTHOR'S NOTE: As I went through the other fictions of Royal Road, I noticed that my style of writing style (slow release, 1 big post) doesnt work well in this site. As such, I'll be experimenting on releasing smaller chapters more often, as this seems to be how the authors of Royal Road does things.

Mind you, my release speed will still be very slow compared to others, but I'll churn out chapters more often than what I used to do.

DISCORD SERVER:

https://discord.gg/M7bmjTH

ANOTHER NOTE: Some of my readers convinced me to set up a discord server. While I have absolutely no idea what to do in a discord server, but if you're interested, just join in and go nuts.

Suggest some storylines or characters, seek advice in just about anything or tell me your deepest darkest secret (you can PROBABLY trust me ^.^).

Feel free to do whatever is fun

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2017
Author: ginobi47

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Views: 112

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Community Reviews(10)

The_GentelmanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
So this story has grown quite a bit since the first chapter. Characters have changed and grown and so has the plot. I really look foreword to what happens in the next arc. For fans of war hammer 40k this is right up your alley
Destr0y3rARoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This could be an amazing story if made correctly. I hope you continue the story ASAP.
The grammar is good and i like the fact that the MC is not some sissified character that has problems with killing people.
Keep us the good work (the rest is just to fill up the character counter)
ValentineNRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
It's brutal.
The MC suffers a trauma, which combined with the brain damage, alters his worldview in a small, but significant way.
Using his powers, he tries to change the world, as he'd originally intended, only this time, as a villain.
The arcs are many and interesting, the battles are short and not boring. There's no technobabble or other similar crap about cultivation or magic.
It's just entertainment.
Spoiler: Spoiler
To put it bluntly, instead of taking criminals to prison, he exterminates them.
Some people will find the concept interesting.
Some of those will become disgusted when they realize the bodycount and methods.
Some will cheer him on regardless.
It's because of this mindset that there's so many negative reviews.
jwrightRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This book is great! It sucks you in and despite having a few obvious flaws, they matter very little in comparison with the fun that this book provides.
DivineCatRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
There is only one chapter so I probably shouldn't judge...
anyways it's good enough that I recommend you try reading and see if you like it...
cause although there was a bit of cringeworthy parts and some awkward parts I liked the chapter!
:/
give it a try!
AShyLeecherRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The writing has the subtlety and finesse of a bulldozer or, more simply stated, none at all. The dialogue also lacks any level of nuance, which appears to stem from a lack of experience with the English language. Another irksome aspect of this story is the most likely meaningless foreshadowing that feels like it was shoehorned in for the heck of it. Despite all that it’s a fun read and is overall similar to crude oil. It has potential but it lacks the refinement needed to reach that potential.
leviathan-pcRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
This will be a rather simple review. The chapters are pretty short with typically one-sentence paragraphs but even with that you get a decent story across and personally I think you do really well with what you do put out. The fight scenes are escpecially engaging. You might want to consider adding a bit more to your chapters though.
Many of the characters are pretty much cardboard cutouts. No real personality and very forgettable. The leads on the other hand are much deeper by comparison, namely Theo, Juno and Nichola. We know more about their personalities at least but not much backstory. I'm sure you have a plan for them, especially Juno but until then you might want to add in more than just a few sentences about their backstories considering you're 100+ chapters in.
Also i'm fine with the fact that he's smart but not really a genius. From what you've shown of his power he doesn't really create anything all that new aside from the eye thing but just improves on what already exists that he found blueprints on from the internet or what have you. For example, a mechanic doesn't need to be a genius to do their job well, they just need to understand how a car works. His power lets him understand how a thing is made and recreate it so long as he understands its structure. He doesn't need to be a genius for that.
Overall, its not perfect by any means but I still enjoy reading it and I look forward to reading more.
Douglass69Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
Spoiler: Spoiler
The story had lots of potential but then I started to actually pay attention to the mc and all that potential was gone. This story has possibly one of the most f**king stupid mc I have ever had the misfortune to read about can’t even give you the parts that are bad because everything is BAD. I MEAN BAD!!!!. I would only recommend this if you like to read about stories of wasted potential and genius mc that are actually retarded, contradicting and have a mentality of a 3 year old at his ABSOLUTE BEST and that might even be insulting to 3 year olds!!!!!!!
CatirosityRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
This is a good story to read IF you don't want a serious story. The fighting is really good, not the best but okay.
The biggest letdown of the whole story is the charecters other then theo and this best friends they are just ridiculous.
If the other characters were done right this story could be the best superhero/viillian on this site.
Read this only if you are looking for good fights.
MirroredRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
A decent start. The following criticism is meant to be helpful and Ihope doesn't come off ass too critical.
1) Way too casual with the mass murder. Your main character kills as easily as he brushes his teeth, even when its too his detriment to do so. Even cold blooded murderers dont kill that easily, is actually the oposite of his supposed paranoid mindset. Also killing should have some emotion tied to it, if only contempt or impatience. "These thugs were just like those who terrorized his family back 'third world country'." If they fall like flies and even the main character doesn't care, why should the reader?
2) Hes poor but has a secret base full of billions of dollars woth of equipment? Also hes super smart and a magical alchemist but can't figure out he should sell stuff? Doesnt even have to be weapons, he could sell tv's or even cars on the blackmarket. Nevermind the fact he can probably just turn fridges into gold.
3)He so paranoid he doesn't trust heroes or business transactions but immediatly gives a underground doctor all of his secrets? Even though it's totally unecessary and he gets nothing from it? Especially stupid when you know hes activally being blackmailed by Crow; a hero that maniuplates others and deals in secrets.
4)Please just name the third world country he comes from and give us a general idea of what life is like there. Stop saying "In the third world country he was from" its super offputting.