Super Babes: A LitRPG Superhero Harem Adventure

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Status

Hiatus

Author

JeremyZenith

Reviews

Community Reviews(10)

• Sillysmiles4everRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Grammar and flow are on point. Characters could use a little more substance.  Over all very good.
  MC seems to be evolving.  In book one he seemed like a jerk but not sure if that was intentional. MC seems a little more mature.
  MC is a man whore.  Not into the Harem thing. But I suppose men will like it.
• gary0044187Royal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  MC is a total blockhead, love that he got the dunderhead build to go with it.  Hopefully he will become un-dumb over time.  Great story, still think Leviathan was a better pick.
• MotrigaRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 4.5

  as the other reviewers have pointed out there is a lot of cliches in the story, but despite that the author manges to make them his own and give them a spin that makes them his own. sure the mc is kinda an  All Might rip off so far but that is subject to change in the future. the wimp that becomes a hero is a classic fantasy trope used in almost all books of the genre and the story should not be judge for making it clear that it is, what it is.
  all in all i recommend the story, the biggest problme i've run into with it is that the next chapter buttom seems to be greyed out too soon.
• chaogoesmuRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The main character and grandfather are decently nuanced, however everyone else is one dimensional. This writing style works on one shot stories, but by book two you want more human characters. Take Heavenly Angel for example. Every action except being nervous about delivering life changing news can be summed up as fantasy perfect girlfriend. In a given moment you have a million things going on. But each character at a given moment has one singular goal, thought, conflict etc. This makes the characters feel shallow and it doesnt stand the test of time. It may seem small, but little things like being worried about how they look after getting out of a fight, letting concern for old friends distract them while doing something, or anything other than the exact issue at hand could really humanize these caricatures.
  Having said that, the story is fast paced and fun with little need to think, and that's a good description for this series. I think the author shot for silver age heroes and succeeded, I just wish there was a little more to it. Think less astro city, more late 80s early 90s fantastic four, if that's what you are in the mood for, it's a great series.
• yeangsterRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  The story is fun, though things seem to come a bit too easily for the main character once he gets his super-powers. The grammar and style are fine, nothing that actively takes me out of the story at least.
  The problem with the characters. Now I only started reading after some of the edits, but the comments by the author and readers make it seem like the main character was much more grating before. But right now, he's bland and inoffensive.
  The problem is the rest of the characters, especially the women. They're not much characters, as much as vessels for wish fulfilment for readers who put themselves in the head of hte main character. The stripper character seems like she was written by a guy who got led on by a stripper, but fell afoul of 'no sex in the champagne room', and this is sort of a revenge fantasy. The superheroines are especially egregious. One's been sexually assaulted, tied up, repeatedly threatened with rape, and the first thing she does is jump on the bones of the main character with his magic penis? The reformed supervillainess's only sexual contact with men was being raped many time by her master, but the main character's magic penis turns the moment she's free?
  And let's not even get into the adult women who's in the body of the child (sorta) but still has sexual urges.
• NIZPRoyal Road

  ★★★★ 3.5

  Good plot and an interesting story, the only problem is protagonist because he is a muscle head, never thinks through his actions and is too self rightious. But overall, it is a good story, good job.
• CiainaRoyal Road

  ★★★ 2.5

  No idea where the glowing reviews come from, but ...
  Let's start with the good :
  Grammar is solid, as well as the general flow. A bit of effort went into world building. Not too much, but an effort is clearly there.
  The debatable :
  It is a superhero setting, with dastardly villains that are as gratuitously evil as they are childishly stupid. Silver era comic style? It is a staple, but if that is not your thing it will grate on you.
  The BAD :
  The characters. They are paper thin and generally unlikable.
  The protagonist has only a superficial morality, but beside that is a creep. A complete, weak willed creep. All his motivations are a vehicle for self indulgence, be it attention or more basic desires. Beside " becoming a hero" ofc. THAT is motivated by not putting in any effort even if he has a pretty good life, that he wants to escape by "cheating" because he has the willpower of an unborn child, and screw all the consequences.
  The girls, as they are written, are all WHORES. let me elaborate. Nothing wrong with having an open and promiscuous life-style. But they All open their legs with the same ease it takes to go for groceries. One thing is having multiple sex partners, another is thinking that a quick round of sex is a standard way of interacting with strangers. I get the Harem tag, but these girls feel more like ass and titties with a bit of backstory and a massive case of nymphomany.
  That is pretty much it, it feels like a first attempt at writing (albeit with a decent grasp of grammar), giving the author ample space for improvement ( that I'm pretty sure will come if he perseveres). Depth, depth and depth. Don't just add trinkets to a car, open the engine compartment and get down and dirty.
  On a personal note : the guy that called a review "trolling"? Stop using that word. Trolling means intentionally riling up people to get a reaction. What he did was just write something that you didn't agree with. Surprisingly, not everything that disagrees with you, or is n
• ThatOneGuyRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  I'm surprised that grammar can do so much for a story. Usually I expect to get a headache reading stories of this low quality. Generally stories of this quality look like they were written in Chinese then machine translated into English.
• MaxsimalRoyal Road

  ★★ 2.0

  As lit RPG.... 1/5
  As a superhero novel... 1.5/5
  As a work of erotica... 0.5/5
  Does that sum up to 3/5?  No it doesn't work that way.  The grammar is ok, but the characters are awful, the plot is pulp, and the eortica is juvenile.  As a.combinayion of all of those, it's a little better than the sum of it's parts, but not much
• Super-SonicRoyal Road

  ★ 0.5

  How does this have such high ratings? The main character is a liability outside of a 1 on 1 fight that doesn't involve a woman and decides to stand still and watch the supervillain who makes people have sex with each other leave while a girl close to him is possibly being raped in that same room. He later stops the police from killing the rape villain and I stopped reading because I was starting to think that there was a possibility that the rape villain would become a hero later.
  The story has no substance outside of porn.