Sunday the Seventeenth
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Ash Gillik encounters a handful of individuals on the day of his death, one of which changes his future. But at a price.
Information
- Status
- Completed
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Fay Voss
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 2
- Views
- 575
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(2)
- luda305Royal Road★★★★★ 5.0Writing fifty words for a basic review for a short story is hard. Especially since I feel obligated to limit myself to the premise within the first few paragraphs.
What would you do if you knew exactly when any person was about to die? And what would you do on your last day? - RznRoyal Road★★★★ 4.0The story is about the MC wallowing and griping about his final moments, it gets philosophical and goes into some backstory before the conclusion hits. It is short enough that the ending is something I won't touch on, but it telegraphs two possibilities right from the beginning. The way it wraps up is fine, but it has some issues with tone and structure that were distracting. Key moments are glossed over while the passage of time itself is concrete. At least the ending is not open-ended.