Stuck Aboard a Train to Hell
Self-Published
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Description
The protagonist wakes up aboard a train traveling to an unknown location with no recollection of how they got there. With amnesia and a poor understanding of his situation, the protagonist will attempt to leave or at least survive with whatever else is on this train with him.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2019
- Author
- NoLifeCreator
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 5.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 1
- Views
- 358
Chapters(1 total)
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Community Reviews(1)
- MrBadWithNamesRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0It's funny - please give the characters names though, because 'the man' refers to 50% of the cast right now.
I think you should give a better description of the room they're in - I get that the first chapter was all action and running away from monsters, but do go over where they are like the chairs and windows and so on.
Good luck.
P.S check the grammar plz