Stray Soul

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Description

What do you do when you are surrounded by darkness that seems to expand to infinity and beyond while something strange is trying to pull you away?

Do you let it pull you away? Do you hope and pray for this to just be a bad dream? Or do you ressist it and ride waves of strange particles like a ship untill you hit something?

... Yeah, you know what William did...

- A new chapter on Mondays at 00:00, and on Fridays at 00:00.

The chapters may come out a few hours earlier, or later, but you will get new chapters at approximately these hours.

- Every chapter 2-3k words long.

IMPORTANT:The discord link I put at the end of the chapters has expired, so, don't click on any links 'till chapter 83 because it might just send you to a scam server. I will fix them... sometime "soon".

Author's note:I am writing this part of the description after I've started the second volume of the book and, while the first 10-15 chapters are rough as they were the first ever chapters I wrote for this book, and I only started writing 6 months ago when I started writing this book, so, like what I said, they are rough to say the least.

But, if you are interested in the fantasy genre as a whole, or just need a somewhat decent story to pass the time, this is the book for you!

It has world-building, religion building, fights, dungeon delves, unraveling conspiracies, and gods and deities. A lot of them. A lot, a lot of them... and a few demons and angels over here an there too alongside with a sytem that I hope is at least somewhat realistic, and wars.

And I encouage you to ignore the rough edges at the start of the book, and at least read through the first 30-40 chapters before deciding if you like the book or not.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2024
Author: RealObservr

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Community Reviews(6)

Level99Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I don't normally leave reviews but I have been really enjoying were this story Is going and everything about the progression feels unique and different from the normal litrpg the way Gods work in the world is very interesting looking forward to see were the story goes from here .
SilviuGhujerRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The style was so great and inspiring and it is very original as we can all tell my the unique and distinct world that is being created before our eyes.
The story is so well put together that I didn't even have to read anything to understand how deep and complex it truly is, it just manifested inside my mind and now I can trully apreciate how much work the author has put in to deliver such an intresting story full of twists and turns at every chapter.
There are no grammar mistakes even tho it is written by a turkish nomad from Mongolia. You can trully see how much work was put in to maintain grammatical accuracy through out the whole book.
The characters are so deep and perplexing, I felt as if I they were real people that I could care about and relate to.
This is one of the greatest books of all time and that is why I am giving it a humble 5/5 stars.
100000eyesRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This story is good. The story is still basically in the pre sentient contact phase of the classic reborn as a monster trope so there isn't much to say but so far it is shaping up to be pretty good. The characters we have been introduced to are not boring and the world is intriguing. My only criticism that's not a nitpick was the overuse of swearing and that has been fixed with the rewrite. All in all this story has potential and I'm interested to see where it goes.
DocmayhemRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I thought the concept was interesting, but the author's misuse of common words (e.g. "fastening" instead of "hastening," and "decibels" instead of "decimals") kept breaking my immersion in the story.
The protagonist's inner monologue is repetitive to the point where it almost seems to be copied and pasted in places. This may simply be a case of the author describing similar scenarios in a similar manner, but again it tends to break my immersion in the story.
A good editor with a stronger vocabulary could probably turn this into a much more readable adventure.
induxRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
I like the premise of the story and the world. My main problem is that the main character’s inner dialogue is annoying to me. The amount of the inner dialogue also slows down the story, so it is hard for me to continue. I also generally don’t like when the System responds to questions, but that is more of a personal preference.
Davey daveRoyal Road
★ 1.0
Fun concept damaged by angst.
The idea is interesting, and could be fun if rewritten.
However every 10th line is all caps swearing, which is not particularly enjoyable to read. Honestly somewhat headache inducing, like a 13yo ipad kid screeching through my screen and ruining what could otherwise be a good story. I can't start enjoying, nor get sucked into the story like this as it is at the moment.