Stranded world (Naruto with crossovers)
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Description
Hotaru was a kid orphaned from the attack of bandits, which leads his village decimated with only him survives. the world still revolves though, saved by the ninjas from Konoha, his life started once again in that orphanage.
cursing life, he wanders around lifelessly, giving up his will to stay alive and moping around while travelling within Konoha.
there he met a kid smaller than him, scorned, bullied, even given scorn filled eyes towards him. he knows that the kid is hurt, but even so...
he's still smiling and look at them in eyes. Seeing the struggle of Naruto, he silently clench his chest, feeling the pain which had no wound, and cries out loud while remembering his grandfather's words 'There's always a reason for something to happen'
From then on, he started to look up, and get a better life. Being adopted, meeting his friends and teachers, also... an ability only he had...
Never did he know that what lies in his future is a grim and dark...tragedy...
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**the pic all get from Pinterest! I only gather and edit them up! especially the character in the page I'm only changing his eyes and hair :D
*any suggestion welcomed! please do so in the comment though...
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- EternalFortune
Tags
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 3.8/ 5.0
- Followers
- 17
- Views
- 15,537
Chapters(17 total)
- Chapter 17: Cleaning upNov 6, 2018
- Chapter 16: Mission targetNov 6, 2018
- Chapter 15: Ice Blood limitNov 6, 2018
- Chapter 14: Mission (4)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 13: Mission (3)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 12: Mission (Astonishment)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 11: MissionNov 6, 2018
- Chapter 10: Genin (3)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 9: Genin (2)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 8: GeninNov 6, 2018
- Chapter 7: Academy (3)Nov 6, 2018
- Chapter 6: Academy (2)Nov 5, 2018
- Chapter 5: Academy (1)Nov 5, 2018
- Chapter 4: Konoha Village (3)Nov 5, 2018
- Chapter 3: Konoha Village (2)Nov 5, 2018
- Chapter 2: Konoha VillageNov 5, 2018
- Chapter 1: PrologueNov 5, 2018
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Community Reviews(2)
- Hairdryer AscenderRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Bad grammar. And annoying sentences, for expample: 'then, the peck started by the male, while another time, the peck started by the female, the thing continued for several times, until their kiss, became more passionate, and hotter.' BRUH.
- natyRoyal Road★★ 1.5so I read the synopsis and here is my comment on it, clean it up!
the synopsis is literally one of the most important parts of the story, it entices the reader to even begin your story and right now I really don't want to read it. so first clean it up and I will read it later.
if you don't know how to easily do that, try Grammarly. trust me, it helps.
(i will edit my review once this has been done to give one for the story itself)