Stranded Coffee Shop In Other World As Place To Share Thoughts [Slice of Life]

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Description

My dream was simple: open a quiet coffee shop in my home. I didn't expect my shop—and my entire house—to be transported to the top of a gigantic tree in another world.

Now, I have a System that provides infinite modern ingredients, an inventory of "magical tools" (like a smartphone and a freezer), and a Shop Skill that makes my cafe an absolute fortress. Inside my walls,no magic works, violence is met with crushing gravity, and even a Goddess cannot force her will upon my domain.

In a world teetering on the brink of tension between all races, a humble barista holding a cup of Espresso has become the most dangerous—and neutral—existence of all.

"Welcome to Panggonan Kawruh. Leave your magic at the door and mind your manners, or the floor will introduce itself to your face. Now let's share our thoughts and knowledges together."

[Chapter 1-20 is still in process of rewritting.]

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: IPa

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 94
Views: 48,010

Chapters(82 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

watlixRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
I liked my time with this story. Nothing mind blowing but nonetheless it was very fun. I especially liked the broken explanation of our world technology to fantasy characters.
sadly, that not the only thing that broken. It pretty clear that English is not the author main language. Reading a chapter can be rough. The sentence structure, verb tense and sometimes whole word are wrong. Overall if still understandable but you notice easily all the mistakes. Yet, in the future I believe that the author will be able to correct everything.
Another thing that needs to be improved is the characters. From where I stop reading, most of them are… quite dumb. They are all supposed to be strong and the best of the races. Yet in the fiction, they are at best annoying children who understand basic math. They wield magic but can’t discern when the mc is making up explanation on the spot. They also don’t feel like actual warriors, priest or demon lord. The characters need work and a lot of it.
in the end, the story is fun. You just need to let your brain gloss over the numerous mistakes. I’m sure that in the end, after a bit of work, the author can solve all of those.
p.s to the author. - I liked the lesson on the other language ( arabic?). It showed how much people differ from me.
GodleydemonRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
I really love the idea of this story and it's setting. The characters are humorous and the situations have some good comedy in them. Unfortunately, alot of this is marred by the subpar grammar. I'm trying to figure out a really nice way to word it, but it really just needs to be completely rewritten with better grammar.
I'm also completely unsure if the main character is male or female. I at first assumed female, but as the story went on. Some would refer to her as male and others female. It took me a while to figure out, that the pronouns at some point had been mixed up. But there wasn't enough description of the main character at any point in the story to figure out what pronoun should be used. So I just keep assuming the main character is female, since there is a female on the cover image.
librarysmilesRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
The main character is having a slice-of-life adventure hiding out in his new café which was relocated to a swords and magic fantasy world.
My favorite part of this story is chapter 6 where some non-fiction information was shared.
It can be difficult to differentiate between grammar errors and the Early Modern English used by others in this story. This story is difficult for me to read.
demureRoyal Road
★★ 2.0
The premise was interesting, and has potential. Unfortunately after the first ten or so chapters the quality of the english drops of steeply, leaving the writting hard to follow. Frequently some sentences are missing portions that would complete the thought... Additionally many, many chapters conisit of drawn out infodumps, making the story hard to be interested in.