Story of Vita

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Description

(warning, I do not know how to write properly. This is just something I decided to do because reading is fun)

A new chance at life, a new road to walk down. But how would you walk down that road?

The shape of a great hero, saving the world and liberating its people? Or something different, something with a bit of malice in it?

Vita, a soul without a soul, decided that being a being that makes no sense to be the most sensible choice.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Lord Sick

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 160
Views: 197,681

Chapters(123 total)

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Community Reviews(4)

greenGrassRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Hello lorsik i like your story . But i need more its to Interesting. it has limitless possibilities. Vita is a nice guy. I like him and your Profile picture. Thanks for a very nice story. I hope its continued verly long time. Tahnks for all the time your story stolen my
SubmersedMushroomRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
I feel that this story is a perfect example of something that is read mostly for the fun weirdness of it. But it does have its issues, like inconsistent story telling and sometimes palpable plot armour. However it makes up for this with a fun, no stake story, it doesn't expect you to take it seriously. So I would recomend reading this as more of a relaxer than a serious read.
the_random_userRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The author prefaces the first chapter with literally "i dont know how to write" so its understandable that there were some weird things going on both grammar and description wise.
There were several insurances of spelling mistakes in the first few chapters but it gets noticeably better as you go through the novel.
Also, while the comedy is pretty simple, it gets a chuckle out of me.
Our main character (or two main characters? Idk. They are literally stuck together, so where one goes the other goes too) sorta seems to have some thought put into their progression pacing. Probably.
Author, if you are reading this, go back to your earlier chapters and just clean up some of the spelling mistakes. Dont go too anal with it and try to change the chapter, just fix the spelling errors and missing words. Also fix your synopsis. Its very weird to read.
lolman159Royal Road
★★★★ 3.5
The author is very clearly a new writer, but this is not a bad thing. The only way to get better is through doing. there's a few spelling mistakes, and the pacing is... almost non existent, but the premise is something great, and i would love to see the author bring it to a conclusion... in a few hundred chapters.
for the author: Keep up the good work, i know from countless failed attempts that writing a story is not as easy as some of the big names here make it seem.