Stonenanny
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
Infamous assassin of the past, now the next on death row. He had his chances, but loyalty towards the goal took the better of him. There was no going back now, he knew it. After death he would go back to the cycle of souls and start anew as it meant to be. Or so he thought.
Assassin to hero babysitter because giving choice to others is overrated.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- hunakos57
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.4/ 5.0
- Followers
- 34
- Views
- 26,887
Chapters(20 total)
- Not a chaper, but a map.Aug 3, 2018
- 1.17 DepartingAug 3, 2018
- 1.16 Last loose ends before the journeyJul 27, 2018
- 1.15 ImprovisationJul 18, 2018
- 1.14 What a forest could offerJul 18, 2018
- 1.13 Carrot sisters (part 2)Jul 14, 2018
- 1.12 Carrot sisters (part 1)Jul 11, 2018
- 1.11 Louret and LorenJul 9, 2018
- 1.10 Sparring is spare timeJul 8, 2018
- 1.09 Body limitsJul 7, 2018
- 1.08 Consequences of the pastJul 7, 2018
- 1.07 Repressed feelingsJul 6, 2018
- 1.06 The little red barnJul 5, 2018
- 1.05 A bad day (pre)Jul 3, 2018
- 1.04 A group of chaos (pre)Jul 3, 2018
- 1.03 two sides of a coin (pre)Jul 3, 2018
- 1.02 VillageJul 2, 2018
- 1.01 Me timeJun 29, 2018
- 1.00 Party, forest, action!Jun 28, 2018
- PrologueJun 28, 2018
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Community Reviews(1)
- ShakeelRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5You have a great idea here with this story and its executed pretty well. While it isba reincarnation story it's a pretty fresh take on it, at the very leqst i can't remember reading one similar to it (the reincarnation premise i mean) in a while and i read a lot of reincarnation and litRPG stories.
Your grammar, however, is you're downfall. While not terrible, it's not that good either. I'm gonna go out on a limb and say you aren't a native english speaker, because your English reads how I tend to butcher other languages when i write in them. Maybe get a friend or someone fluent in english (and English grammar specifically, you'd be surprised how many native English speakers have terrible grammar when writing) to read over and edit it before posting. Or you could use grammarly.
I would've given 4.5 (too soon in story for me to just give a 5 star rating), but that grammar made me drop a star.
tl;dr Great idea, good story, grammar needs work.
edit: Bumping to 4 stars as you've gone through the story again with a spell/grammat checker. Your sentence structure is still a bit 'off' from standard English though and you have a tendency to leave out a word every once in a while when typing or swap the positions of two words. That isnt to say it isn't better now though.