Stolen
Self-Published
Community Rating
Description
A child stolen from his parents, subjected to torture and misery for 6 years before his mind finally shattered into pieces, his once sole control over his body stolen, now shared with unknown beings that are as puzzled as he is over their existence.Finally escaping the home he knew, how will he survive with these voices in his mind that takes over his body from time to time?Strictly for mentally mature readers, story depicts gory and psychological related mental issues in detail and is relatively depressive with a maniac of a Main Character.
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2015
- Author
- Sildrean
Royal Road Stats
- Rating
- 4.3/ 5.0
- Followers
- 53
- Views
- 33,360
Chapters(18 total)
- Chapter 15Apr 20, 2016
- Chapter 14Mar 12, 2016
- Chapter 13Feb 18, 2016
- Chapter 12Feb 6, 2016
- Chapter 11Jan 23, 2016
- Information and QuestionsJan 19, 2016
- Chapter 10Jan 12, 2016
- Side Chapter (Rylain)Dec 26, 2015
- Chapter 9Dec 22, 2015
- Chapter 8Dec 8, 2015
- Chapter 7Dec 7, 2015
- Chapter 6Dec 5, 2015
- Chapter 5Dec 1, 2015
- Chapter 4Nov 22, 2015
- Chapter 3Nov 19, 2015
- Chapter 2Nov 14, 2015
- Chapter 1Nov 11, 2015
- [Prologue]Nov 10, 2015
Reviews
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Community Reviews(5)
- FennRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Ok, first of all, sabethunder8: While reviews are meant to show whether you like a story or not, and tell the author and other readers why, the shit you’re supposed to be posting has to be true.
“He ends up being a sycophantic, racist, sadist, and a future rapist with those messed up personalitys in him. His whole character disgusts me so far and it would be hard for the author to change it.”
His level of sycophantic-ness is still at a humane level. He’s only doing what he believes will lead to his survival, and can you really blame him for why he thinks that way?
He isn’t racist. He doesn’t believe his race is better than every other race because he doesn’t even know what the hell he is.
While he has a sadistic personality, it’s still at an understandable level. I know a person who suffered in a similar manner, and the authors depiction of how they probably felt is actually quite realistic.
A future rapist? Are you even serious? The story never even talked about anything sexual. While the main character is kind of messed up, he is still a child. For even thinking that is how the story is going towards… I think you’re the sick one here, not the author, or the mc.
Now for the actual review XD
Style: I haven’t seen anything bad about it yet, and it doesn’t hinder the experience your story provides in any kind of way.
Story: The story does have an unpopular genre, but who says that I dislike it? I think it’s awesome and brave that the author wrote about an MC with mental issues. Compared to other stories where the main character goes through hell and then comes out unscathed, I like this story way more. The story is going a bit too fast though, especially in the last couple of chapters. Everything is happening so quickly that I couldn’t visualize the story anymore.
Grammar: Except for a couple mistakes here and there, (which is totally understandable,) you’re doing great. The rarity of the mistakes doesn’t lower the quality of the story at all, and I actually find it h - kaelrabeloRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0First of all i would like to aplogize about my grammar( english is not my main language )
So, about what saberthunder8 said, i think it 's ridiculous its cleary said on the sinopse and genres that it it 's a dark story and i have to say : i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee it, man you've got me shaking while i was reading ( first time eva) and i would hope that it stays that way .S i just created a account to say that i support you and that i want moarrrrrrr plz i need my drugs - wohlzyRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0May contain *spoiler*
To resume this story with one sentence : “If everyone else is a monster, then you are the monster”
A pretty clever way to build a character, with differents personality so that he never act the same way even if they agree on most things for they are the same yet differents.
Some personnality are most ‘present’ than other : the calm, the angry and the ‘broken’ original.
while others are less presents but have as much importance : the weak and the ‘loving’ one.
It feel like there are different mental issues within one mind.
As for other character we still don’t know much about them.
Of course there is Iris (That i hate) i was so happy when she died for she is the cause of all of the mc’s problem. But then she find a way to enter the mind of the mc and join his personalities to add even more problem to him ( I want her so fucking dead !)
Then there is the parents, i’m still not sure about them and their attitude might have something to do with what the bitch said to them but i’m waiting for more information about them.
For now it feel like it’s the mc against the world (RIP Tupac) for he has yet to meet someone that will change it. - imlmendezRoyal Road★★★★★ 4.5I really like this kind of "dark" story and MC, feels kinda rushed, but the MC is well-built and i would like to see more chapters coming!
Keep up the good work - sabethunder8Royal Road★★★★ 4.0“at chapter 9”
I thought from the synopsis that I would pity the character and he would have a strong start. But. No.
Spoiler
He ends up being a sycophantic, racist, sadist, and a future rapist with those messed up personalitys in him. His whole character disgusts me so far and it would be hard for the author to change it.
“sorry about the complaining I was half asleep when writing that”
Actual review
Character: the main character I dislike just because of what he has done but the side character seem to be getting well developed.
Story: I have no idea where your taking this but so far the character development is fine. The story is moving a little faster then I can handle.
Grammer: I don’t really judge Grammer because we are on royalroadl.com and lots of fiction have good story
but sh*t grammer. From what I have read so far yours is fine.