Steve the cultivator

Self-Published

Community Rating

Description

Steve, a powerful cultivator reincarnates to the modern world, finds a job and falls in love.

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2023
Author
Aa_kk

Tags

ACTIONSUPERNATURALMARTIAL ARTSSLICE OF LIFEROMANCE SUBPLOTREINCARNATIONCULTIVATIONSUPER HEROES

Royal Road Stats

Rating
4.3/ 5.0
Followers
7
Views
8,378

Chapters(25 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • MacbethinstienRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Hehe. Didn't know it would override my previous review.. Anyway here's a new advanced review! Let's begin!.
    Style 5/5
    The style has improved in my own opinion, as it is now beginning to become more action-y of a sort, with Steve finally exploring again, I'm hoping for a new action filled arc! And I think seeing Steve struggle a bit would be really interesting to read.
    Story 5/5
    The story is progressing more now, and I feel like a bit of an exploration arc is incoming! Which would be really interesting, as Steve seems like this omniscient being, but seeing him actually learn new things would be great! But it would still get old if all he did was struggle.
    Grammar 4.5/5
    The grammar is still good, but there are a few cases of less than optimal grammar, like a few of the chapter titles, however it's still really readable! It's not like It's not fine though- That's about all I have to say for grammar.
    Character 5/5
    The characters are still good! Steve recovering from his loss, raising a kid, overall really nice! It would've been weird if he turned all weepy and just never got over it, so his recovery is a good choice in my opinion
    Also, just a liiiiiitle side note, But making the chapters longer would be nice! They are realllllly short so pleaseeeeee make them a bit longer?
  • younRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is a decent option for those looking for a quick and engaging read that combines elements of romance and tragedy. However, the story does have some minor plot holes in the first few chapters, such as the protagonist's quick learning abilities not translating to finding a job or their use of telekinesis to influence others which doesn't make any sense.. The grammar in these initial chapters while it isn't bad but it can definitely improve .
    Despite these initial shortcomings, the style of the story is quick-paced and each chapter tells a unique story that is easy to follow. The narrative keeps the reader engaged and interested in what happens next, making it a good option for someone looking for an enjoyable and relatively easy read.
    Overall, while there are some areas for improvement, specially in the first few chapters (1-2-3) the story is still worth checking out for those who enjoy a quick, engaging read with elements of romance and tragedy.
    For me ,I really like it regardless, specially in one of the later chapters and without spoilers I actually was about to cry.
    I think more people will like the story if the author edit chapter 1-2-3,