Starvation March

Self-Published

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Description

A broken soul, driven mad by hunger, is finally freed into the world by it's mother.

Can such a soul, granted the skills it wanted by The God, seek redemption?

Does it even want to?

It's name long forgotten, betrayed by it's own race and abandoned by his loved ones.

What will it do now that it can finally seek the power it so desperately wanted?

Of course, it will devour all of those who oppose it in it's search for a purpose.

*Author's Comment: This is a psycopathic mess*        *Vacation Break. Don't expect chapters for a long time*

Information

Status
Hiatus
Year
2017
Author
Sitna

Royal Road Stats

Rating
3.9/ 5.0
Followers
309
Views
263,722

Chapters(41 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

  • xenotrapRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    The Character in this story is easily the most batshit crazy (in the most literal sense) character I have ever had the pleasure of reading, this story is easily my favorite story to ever be written. There is a distinct lack of cohesive naritve in the story and it benifits from this fact, it alows the true essence of a mass murdering sycopath to come through.
    This story is not for either the faint or pure of heart, the main character is not one of those supposedly villian types that are not all that villianous. No she is while not down right trying to be evil on purpose if your favorite pastimes are eating babies and torturing people to death you end up being evil.
    The final thing I need to empasize if you don't enjoy getting taken on a wild ride by a seemingly nonsensical madman who just so hapens to be a literary genius then this is not the story for you.
    P.S: The grammar while not great doesn't actualy effect the quality of the read as there are no places that require rereading or deap thought to understand.
  • Mike WagnerRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is really cute and fun.
    I really enjoyed how cute the main character is and the internal monologing.
  • MorkailRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    Op MC the plot is her soul personal insight so far nothing can stand up to her also she found her own monster county good job bloody queen cat.       Only complaint is she wants friend. It acts a little to baby shit crazy for anyone to trust being around her it's ok to want to kill. Eat and torture people but don't make people you like feel that you might eat them they will never trust you. Bat kitty
  • Narata88Royal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This is a really great novel. At first i did not think it was going  to be good, but once i started to read it i was hooked. It caught my attention completely. I love the whole story and especially the man charater. I love how she is op and nothing can stop her. I especially love her chaotic character and how she is a complete psychopath. I hope thatt she finds a man or two or three that can be her lovers.
  • AverageGuyRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 5.0
    This story is truly amazing, I'm not one to like profanity in my stories and this little adorable homicidal maniac has gotten me head over heels for her,  The structure in which the autor has created the MC makes you think of her actions as acceptable and the humor really makes all the gore... light I guess, I mean she is indeed rampaging all around killing people in the most brutal ways, but she is cute though so it's all good... I guess...
    This story will make you kinda question if you really are a sane person for liking this adorable murderer. There are some ortography mistakes, but they are always the same which begs the question, does the autor does them on pupose? The pace comes fluidly, enough to keep you hooked.
    My only complaints is with some foreshadows,:
    Spoiler: Spoiler
    other dimentions - ok
    space odissey - really gurl?
    And please don't let Asu die, not cool...
    For the Autor I say: Keep up testing the boundaries of sanity!
    As for the readers... you're in for a treat.
  • IcyResistanceRoyal Road
    ★★★★★ 4.5
    This novel really drew me in with the synopsis and I've gotta say, it's really promising.
    The style is great for this novel. There's no sudden "Hello, my name is *insert generic name here* and *insert pitiful background here*. It just goes straight into the story and introduced the character a bit after the situation or setting is suitably described.
    The grammar is like 9.9/10 in which my only problem (and frankly it doesn't bother me as much) is the spelling of 'sure' as the author has a strange habit of spelling it as 'shure'. But, eh, to each their own right?
    The story is coming along nicely (WITH NO YURI THANK THE HEAVENS) and is going into a promising direction. (Honestly I have nothing against yuri, but reading a bunch of gender bender novels where the mc is female and has a yuri harem or no romance at all is grinding my gears)
    The character, in her epicly psychotic (in a good way) state of mind, has normal acceptance issues. Her actions all hide the sadness and fury in her, which the author hides well with minor details here and there which was good foreshadowing, but she has a few tender moments where she tries brutally manhandling it forcefully.
    I would recommend this novel for people who don't mind slow romances (if there will even be one now that I think about it) and for people who do not mind or even relish what society may call a disturbing mindset. (Honestly that's so biased like I can't even believe, in my mind that type of mindset is perfectly normal as I can accurately predict what they might or may not do.)
    *Turns into lightning and flies away with thunder booming*
  • node.Royal Road
    ★★★★ 4.0
    I'm no pro-writer or master of English grammar, that's why the decent score. Just enjoyment to see MC does what she wants.
    I like the MC's struggles , seeing her breaking down and being alienated. At the same time those elements took the back seat and she does what she wants again.
    Kinda hoping to see more of the monster nation being developed or that kid asking MC for help to get revenge or country back.
    Then the crossover. Enough said, I stop there.
  • cokacola142Royal Road
    ★★★ 3.0
    To be honest, i really like this story, up to a point. Sure the grammar isn't all that great and the story is a bit of a power fantasy but i liked the world and i liked the protagonist as a character (tad bit to op for my liking but still)
    What really broke the story for me however was when the author had the character travel to preexisting anime worlds. anime worlds i know nothing about because i don't have much of an interest in those several hundred episode long stories. It kinda lost me at that point. I dont know anything that the author is referring to because hes talking about it in a way that you could only know if you have watched the animes.
    to repeat myself, i liked the story but once it jumped into other worlds and talked as if i had already known everything about them it kinda lost me.
  • MastersgtjamesRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    Reading this story makes one feel like they are within the mind of a demented, sociopathic child(Author).
    Mostly due to the grammar, contradicting chapters, and flat out ridiculousness.
    I advise that if you are too strict on grammar (want simple words to be spelled correctly), or if you enjoy the author reading comments and making adjustments to the story or plot issues. To just avoid this.
    Otherwise... HAVE FUN! the story is all over the place, literally.
    Travel with the Auther as he journeys through anime, manga, wuxia, and all other facets of entertainment culture. Ultimately killing them. JOY!
  • fanvaronRoyal Road
    ★★★ 2.5
    The start was ok, the character was still realistic but then over time just devolved into a mass murdering psychopath without a reason (at least as far as the reader is aware of). Same with the story, at first it seemed like there was one, but that turned out to be a bluff (why do the whole child of God thing in the first place?).
    There basically is no story, I mentioned already it's just a  bunch of senseless slaughter, with no discernible motives or goals, which makes it extremely boring in the long run there is just not tension or anticipation.
    Like the author wrote in his bio this is just a bunch of his written out fantasies and that's it, you can't really call it a story since it has no overall theme no progression nothing. At most, it's like a bunch of short stories with a recurring character.
    Anyways I would not really recommend it, the beginning was pretty good but then it just went downhill, the whole second world (One Piece Universe) was just completely pointless apart from murdering and creating some vague but powerful powers.
    Like I said a written out fantasy but not a story.