Starborn: Origin of the Stars

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"How did I end up here? I dreamed of exciting adventures and uncovering secrets, not of bloody fights and losing friends."- Robin Tulward

About the seriesStarborn: Origin of the Stars is a sci-fi story about a young man who dreams of traveling the universe to explore new planets, meet different species and follow the trail of a long-lost civilization. However, when he finally sets out on his journey, events begin to escalate and pull him and his friends deeper and deeper into one of the oldest mysteries of the known universe.

About Book 1: Ruca IIRobin is a technocrafter in Seka, the capital of the planet Rucasur. His genetic mutation allows him to sense energy around him, which got him a job as a mechanic at a local workshop. After he finds a strange object and his mutation accidentally reacts to it, Robin’s curiosity gets the better of him and he sticks his nose into things better left untouched.

Book I -STUBBook II - finishedBook III - ongoing

The story needs some time to gain speed, so I wanna address one of the most important questions.

> "Will there be action?"Yes, there will be action. Enough to make you sit shivering in excitement on the edge of your seat!However, it will take some time to get things rolling. From Cp. 17 on, Robin's life begins to escalate...

Release Schedule:* 2 Chapters / Week [Mo/Fr]

Chapter-Length:* 900-1.200 words/chapter at the beginning* 1.600-2.200 words/chapter from Cp. 20+* 2.000-2.600 words/chapter from Arc II

> Audio-chapters for Spotify & Co onPatreon> Art, covers and announcements onDiscord

> This novel was a participant in the Royal Road Writathon 2/2023 challenge

Information

Status: Ongoing
Year: 2024
Author: Dusky van Doom

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Rating: 4.4/ 5.0
Followers: 774
Views: 228,745

Chapters(128 total)

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Community Reviews(10)

Ashish choudharyRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This is a pretty sweet fiction so far. There are very few rough patches but that's expected for a webfiction before publishing so no issues there.
Grammar is pretty good, style and prose is interesting to read. I like the way of presentation of the story, go ahead give it a shot and you'll know if you like it or not. I do like it and had fun reading this sci fi, going ways that are not well explored by others is always good to see.
BitterblossomRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Starborn may just be starting its journey with a few chapters available, but for me, it's already shaping up to be a promising sci-fi tale. The premise is pretty intriguing, especially the mutations (this universes take on special powers) feel like a breath of fresh air. The world-building hints at a universe with a lot of potential as well. Though it's early days, the novel shows promise, and I'm excited to see where robins adventure leads. Definitely one to watch!
Reed33Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
This story gave me exactly what I was looking for
Sci-fi, exploration and that nodges of realistic story telling where people aren't overpowered or protected
A beginning that start slow and explain the world. While keeping the focus in the moment.
I hope more people will discover this little gem and support thewriter
S. LuxpaxRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Starts off in a far future in which people have special power through their genetic mutations and develops into an adventure of the MC Robin and his friend Patience.
They are the perfect pairing as his powers are on the technological side, while she has the muscle for heated situations.
The writing feels natural as in a way that the reader can easily follow on. The author did a good job describing the sci-fi universe without getting too technical, but put just the right amount of tech terms in it, that you would expect from a setting thousand of years in the future and a technocrafter MC.
The story starts out a bit slow, but that's ok as we are just learning about the world and the MC on his day to day business. At about chapter 17 it really starts to spiral into an adventure that the MC is not really ready for but definitely has the resolve to take head on.
His journey to find out more about a long lost civilization is a balance between mysteries and action.
The grammar is near flawless and way better than some other stories here on RR even in the early chapters.
The MC Robin is just a normal guy at the beginning but you can clearly see him changing along the way. He feels relatable and makes reasonable decisions.
The other characters act normal, like anyone else would in their situation. They have reasonable depth and you unterstand their motives for their actions.
Overall a book I would recommend if you are into sci-fi, unraveling mysteries and adventure.
SolenRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What a wonderful story! Well written and truly intoxicating. Can’t wait for more!
So much to look forward to with Arc 3 but damn was the story immersive and interesting so far. It also feels like inte what im expecting while not being able to know what lies ahead.
well hard to explain but do read it and you’ll soon be hooked like me 😅
nib111Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I'm enjoying this story. It has an immersive world with both dark and light elements to it with neither being shoved in your face. the world is not simple is has complex of intonation in the back round different factions and more we have not been introduced too.
the MC i find relatable from the in the grove i have a system that works (the status quo) to a person with a fire kindled in his soul and going for it (push him self to be/do more).
the MC's friends are people have there own hopes and dreams as well as encounters/ troubles they face and work on.
LaamaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I have not read too many chapters yet but this is a gem. Story is very well written and enjoyable to read. I have not found any problem with the grammar. Also characters all have some thought behind them and not just put there as a decoration.
I would definitely recommend this novel to everyone.
I hope that the release rate would go up. That is the only downside of this novel at the moment.
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Lucian T. EinarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Title: Starborn: An Epic Space Adventure
Overall: Starborn: Origin of the Stars by Dusky van Doom presents an intriguing sci-fi tale that follows Robin, a technocrafter with a unique genetic mutation. The story unfolds as Robin embarks on a journey through the stars in search of ancient secrets and new technologies. With a mix of action, mystery, and character development, the novel grips readers in an immersive space adventure.
Style: The author employs an engaging and descriptive writing style that fits well within the sci-fi genre. The narrative flows smoothly, balancing light-hearted moments with emotional depth. The single point of view adds focus to the storytelling, drawing readers into Robin's experiences and the vast universe he explores.
Story: Starborn introduces a plot filled with mystery and discovery within a sprawling universe. The slow start gradually builds into a thrilling adventure as Robin delves into the unknown, blending elements of sci-fi and genetic mutations seamlessly. The pacing keeps readers engaged, unveiling a world ripe for exploration and filled with potential.
Grammar: The novel boasts near-flawless grammar, making it an easy and polished read. Rare spelling errors and impeccable sentence structure enhance the overall quality of the writing, setting it apart from other works in the genre.
Character: Robin, the main character, undergoes a relatable and believable transformation throughout the story. His growth is complemented by well-developed supporting characters who add depth and authenticity to the narrative. Each character's motivations and actions feel natural, drawing readers into their struggles and triumphs.
In conclusion, Starborn: Origin of the Stars offers a captivating space opera with a compelling blend of action, mystery, and character-driven storytelling. Fans of sci-fi and adventure will find themselves immersed in a richly crafted universe, eagerly following Robin's journey through the stars.
Perrin AyberaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Excellent 1st chapters with a fun premise. Not many true Sci-Fi novels within the Litrpg genre that makes sense but this one seems to hit it so far.. I like the shock of humans not being the center of the universe. It acknowledges how civilization views us as a race but opens the door to find out more about the past. will edit my review as I go further in the story.
Content loverRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This novel to me feels like my childhood dream come true.
The mc wants to explore the outside world the stars and more , he has the adventurus spirit buning inside him and the author does the good work of keeping it real, he shows that the world is no lala land.
They also have superpo- Cough mutations but they don't sideline the sci-fi part , instead they meld together which is a big plus cause many times one overwhelms the other.
So the novel got superpo- cough "mutations" , also the sci-fi and the characters feel good enough for now , they could use some work.
All in all If you have read until now , just believe in me and give it a chance and thank me later.