Star's Malice

Self-Published

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Description

Mark was just a tool created for the sole purpose of protecting his Young Miss. But what if he got betrayed, and killed, what can he do? Wait, he actually got into some other world? And there are Alpacows here? Join Mark on his journey in this new world as he attempts to understand how he got here and to what purpose.

This story is for other lovers of stealthy characters and sneaky, stabby stabby people. The main character will try to resolve most of his encounters before his prey knew what hit them. I will try to portray his expertise as best as I can. If that's what you like? You're welcome to try.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2023
Author: TheUmbraBear

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Rating: 4.5/ 5.0
Followers: 86
Views: 41,729

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Community Reviews(3)

bobfisherRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I recently read a novel called Star's Malice and I really enjoyed it. The main character is mature, professional, and adapts well to the new world. The levelling system is reminiscent of the novel 'The Gamer' in a positive way, and I personally appreciated the rogue character archetype. The novel focuses on the main character's journey to fit into the new world, rather than defeating a grand enemy. At chapter 14, there aren't many side-character interactions yet, but the story flows well without any grammar mistakes. Although the storyline may seem repetitive, there is a reason for its success. Overall, I found Star's Malice to be a well-written and engaging novel that I would recommend to fans of the genre. I think the story will only get better from here.
justomnipotentRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
Really liked it 99% better than most stuff on this site hope to see Mark grow beyond even the people of this world's imagination. Like every serialise story has it problems but great first work. Hope to see more subordinate training and maybe some skill like teacher or drill sergeant, shadow teacher and stuff like that.
LoydRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Until ch. 17 novel contained intrigue, after became predictable, and started its path on the road to the final destination — cliche. Seriously,
mc rescues boy and trains him, gives up easy exp, loot and reputation, just because he wants to have a good life. It's alright, I understand, still it has 3 warnings, I expected something unique, here we have cliche. Maybe it is made specifically to show mcs future personalitie growth, at least I hope so.
Based on what we have now, it will become cliched super-duper save the world strongest assassin story.
I will change review with 30 new chapters.