St Chaos Healer

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Description

Once a powerful Demon Overlord, betrayed and murdered by his own subordinates, vows revenge with his dying breath. Reincarnated as Benjamin Almond, a human baby, he must adapt to his new mortal life without demonic powers. With his past memories intact, he embarks on a journey to master mana arts and rise to power in the mortal realm.Will he fulfill his quest for vengeance or find a new purpose as Benjamin, a fledgling mage? Join his transformation from demon lord to aspiring mortal mage.

Information

Status: Completed
Year: 2023
Author: HellerFeed

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Rating: 3.4/ 5.0
Followers: 232
Views: 186,055

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Community Reviews(6)

ItkovanRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
The story starts "slow" as it starts off in a void, with minor flashbacks to the characters first life, before his rebirth.
We're then given a small glimpse of his "development" as a baby before we skip off to a more active age.
once the "baby-stage" is done, the story seems to pick up its pace and you get to learn more about his environment and other kids his age.
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I have not found any spelling or grammatical errors of note and i've read through chapter 17.
The story seems to flow well, despite jumping some years ahead in time, without anything glaring at you or causing you to pause and re-read sections.
While the most relevant characters are kids at this point, there's enough to their behaviour that one might guess how they would turn out as adults.
I for one will be coming back to see if i've guessed right and to see how the (former)Demon lord fares.
Alessandro LombardiRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
The previous review is totally wrong. There aren't grammar error or else. Read and can judge.
And now how to reach 50 words?
well, maybe who did the other review is your long term enemy and is like your first charter, you got stabbed by hai 50 words in your back...
RiverniteRoyal Road
★★★★ 3.5
Isekai Birth- Toddler- Teen years are always a bit awqward, this story handed it well. Lots of lovely scenes, like the forest stuff. Protagonist is not too overpowered. And im always kept on the edge, sort of easy to predict where the story will go, but im still here.
The plot with his mother is kind of obvious.
HeroSyndicateRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
Bad grammer. Saying they are fixing it but working backwards in volumes. The story itself has some promise so I give it at least 3 stars. Everyone seems kinda stupid. Banter feels like a episode of Ironman. Demon Lord MC does not act like a 400 year old Demon Lord, whom should have many advantages from life experience yet does not.
Chaos KatRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
While the story concept is pretty interesting, and the main character seems fun, the stilted writing and poor grammar is difficult to ignore. The story is written in such a manner that I wonder if English is the author's second language. It takes attention away from the story for me, unfortunately.
Recreation_2Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
Author, I hope you proof read this story; the grammar is really bad. You can use grammarly or Ai to correct a lot of the mistakes. It would be much more readable and would certainly increase the number of readers and reviews.
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