Spiritsmith

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Description

Well, I am in this slightly odd situation…You see, I'm a reincarnated person, born into a world that looks a bit like something right out of an old kung-fu movie, with people wearing Chinese dresses and doing things like running in the air.Here… Things get odd. My memory from my last life is a bit faulty, with some very important points missing, yet others strangely clear. For one, I at least am sure I was a man in my previous life, but I can't remember my name, face or the name where I lived, but I can still remember things like school, the face of my friends and so on.Now, I am Lia, daughter of a blacksmith and a gorgeous woman who kept a secret from us before suddenly disappearing. Reborn on the wrong gender, with the dream of being a blacksmith, a missing mother and stuck as an aide, I'll need to survive whatever this world can throw at me.I hope I can do that with so many hungry eyes on me…What? Being cute is really hard work!-----Tagged mature for POSSIBLE future content.A try at something new for me, hope i can get this moving for a long time. Wish me luck! ^^Title still tentative... Might change later.

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2015
Author: Warhawx

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.3/ 5.0
Followers: 1,468
Views: 549,920

Chapters(38 total)

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Community Reviews(9)

zeldaRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
What can I say? This now is one of my bookmark fiction. Grammar is very good, the character is good to me. A spoil little girl with a funny side of her. Can't wait to see till she learn smithing. I want mooooooooore..
SciFiAddictRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I normally don’t like gender bender but this is pretty interesting so far. On the other hand it is still early and plenty of time for the author to screw it up. To add to my review, it’s been pretty good and funny. I just wish the author would write faster.
hurt_lock3rRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
The story is getting interesting slowly, when i mean slowly, i mean in a good way; not rushing. The characters are well defined , bit and pieces to be done here and there, but overall it’s ok. There are some fun parts to it, and of course the gender bender thing ( I don’t know why some people hate gender bender stories? You should read The New journey of an old soul if you are in that category).
The grammar is good, not many mistakes that i have noticed. As the author has said that he is doing this the first time,so we can’t really see where the story will go as in what’s the main goal of the MC except finding her mother. Well even without that it’s definitely worth the read.
markhtarRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
I can't actually find words to say how great I find this story, even though the plot has yet to to reveal itself (last chapters seems to bit btw :D) the flow is actually smooth, the path is slow yet it is not a problem it's going well with the story. We get to have a deeper understanding of most of the characters instead of rushing blindly into action which is great!
It is a read I recommend; even though the author seem to be slightly busy making cakes instead of posting sometimes :D
Style (5/5) : As I said the read is smooth and enjoyable, I actually long for those chapters so maximum it is!
Story: (4/5) : As far as I love this fiction, the story had yet to reveal at least part of its plot after almost 30 chapters (-1), which will hopefully disapear once the story is advanced enough!)
Grammar: (5/5) Maximum, if there is a problem with your grammar it is not up to me judge it anyway (I can't see it if there is :s )
Characters (5/5):: I have been curious of the gender bender at a time but very soon found it borish in the generic stories. Which is actually pretty well done in this story: Yes the gender bender is there, yes it somehow upset the life of the character but luckily its not the center of the story, more like a wild running gag which may appear in time of need.
Weirdos appart (wait without the weirdos who's left in this story actually? ) the characters are well defined, have their own characteristic and personals behaviours, well I feel like most of them are well made, so I don't have anything to add. (On second thought; her daddy employees do not count they are not humans :p)
And so it is a global 4.5 because this story is great, have an awesome potential for the future plots and stuff and I don't have anything to complain about this story; 5 being for mind blowing stories but I might change it later on!
Ps: the title is about the author, which happen to be one several dudes in one body holding several stories on RRL, so cake Warhawks (spiritsmith) has done
LomyrilRoyal Road
★★★★★ 4.5
This shows some promise. As of this review, I am at chapter 6, and I look forward to more.
Moist NuggetRoyal Road
★★★★ 4.0
Style: I'm not much of a critic so I'll leave it as 'pretty good'
Grammar: 9/10, there might be a few mistakes here and there, but overall it's got solid grammar.
Story: The story is 10/10 as a slice of life, but there's one thing that's bothering the shit out of me. The author titled this story "Spiritsmith" but I'm on chapter 35 and it doesn't seem like we're even close to seeing the protagonist smithing.
Character: Because the author hasn't been focusing on a lot of plot, the characters are developed well so it gets a 5/5.
EdwardRoyal Road
★★★ 3.0
The style is great, the grammar as well, but the story... oh the story...
Is it just me or... ok, it it just me. I just don't like this kind of plot, but for all those who do not have a straight out alergic reaction to the plot, try it out. You might love it.. Or you might run away screamin' like a little Girl....
Girl....
Girl....
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Ok, I'll give it an overall score of 3 stars. Maybe a bit too much, but maybe too little as well. Honestly speaking, one can't be objective in these matters, so I'll have a compromise in this case. Though, I'm not sure how I feel about the characters. They do come over a bit flat, except the poor poor MC, *sob* Don't give up MC!
Shinobi.510Royal Road
★★★ 2.5
It is one of the best written stories on RR however you have to many forshadowing events that are un resolved for way too long. It's almost like you are trying to write four different mechanics yet only are able to write one. For instance: what is going on with the mother? There has been no clues or pov changes to describe why she left and what is going on with her now. And the MC seems to totally forget about her which irritates me. Then there is the whole reincarnation game the gods are playing. It feels like it was just thrown in there. And lastly this story seems to be more of a daily life or there would be more progress in the last 30 chapters. Actually i wouldn't mind reading a daily life story and feel you should edit out all these random forshadowing events that have not progressed or throw in some progress on them and do a time skip to where she can progress the story. It is dragging too long with only writing about how the main character is cute or that she works hard. I hope you make a decision soon i am starting to get disappointed in this story. Thanks for the story, hope you don't feel like i dissed you. Looking forward to what you do next.
Charles83Royal Road
★ 1.0
Its too sad, the idea of having a new innovator who can become a blacksmith on a world of cultivation is great and it is interesting but the author made the main character an slave from the beggining and it is so slow that the MC may never get to even start her own blacksmith training much less finish it, also by becoming a slave the MC is totally limited on how she will ever be able to create what she wants.
In other words a great idea damaged by a very poorly development. Hope that another author pick this idea up and develop it right, this sadly is not the way, if you like seeing a boring story who takes forever to start then read this, if not give it a pass and look for something else to read.