Spirit Of The Forest (Dropped)

Information

Status

Hiatus

Year

2017

Author

KeebyChibi

• Announcement
  May 29, 2017
• Chapter 14: Soul Sister
  May 27, 2017
• Chapter 13: Little Tornado Of Death
  May 22, 2017
• Side Story 1: Twin Champions Of Justice
  May 17, 2017
• Spirit Of The Forest Timeline
  May 14, 2017
• Chapter 12: Endurance, Vengence, And A Girl's Tears
  May 12, 2017
• Not A Chapter: Schedule Plans
  May 11, 2017
• Chapter 11: Criminal Hero
  May 9, 2017
• Chapter 10: Complications
  May 5, 2017
• Chapter 9: The Overly Helpful? System
  May 2, 2017
• Chapter 8: Quest Received
  May 1, 2017
• Chapter 7: Looming Problems And Solutions
  Apr 28, 2017
• Chapter 6: Glade Of Peace
  Apr 26, 2017
• Chapter 5: Second Horde And Weakness
  Apr 24, 2017
• Chapter 4: Princess' Task
  Apr 24, 2017
• Chapter 3: Adventurers and Mothers
  Apr 22, 2017
• Chapter 2: Monster Horde (Severely Edited)
  Apr 21, 2017
• Chapter 1: Strolling(Chased) Through The Forest [SEVERELY EDITED]
  Apr 20, 2017
• Prologue: A Dungeon Lecture [New Prologue]
  Apr 18, 2017

Reviews

Community Reviews(1)

• jmmastersRoyal Road

  ★★★★★ 5.0

  Overall the story  quite funny which is a big plus for me especially since most works are laced with too much tragedy. You won't be disappointed, a few chapters in and you'll see thats it quite an easy read.
  Style - The author prefers to use script style writing which makes it easier for you to distinguish who talks and whatnot. He still has to come up with his own unique writing but he's off to a good start.
  Story - The story has promise, don't let the prologue fool you, you might think his world building is a bit cliched but it was executed out nicely in a brief yet comedic way.
  Grammar - There are still lots of points to improve, like correct usage of a/an/the articles, usage of pronouns and such. I gave it a 4.5 because he still has a lot to improve but the mistakes can be overlooked at for now.
  Character - Characterization is fine, not too many details at once but enough to make you recognize each person. Give it time and we'll see what happens.
  I recommend this to anyone looking for a nice comedic story. This one would be easy to read and you'll run out of chapters before you even notice it.