Spirit memories
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Years 2xxx a Bell sounds can be heard, a purple light covered the sky. Golden pillar start appear between the purple cloud, one minute after these pillar shoot in countless direction. The people stuck by the pillar start flying and where take in the purple cloud. After ten minutes the sky became blue like nothing happened. After investigation one million people have been “kidnapped”, the scientific told alien prepare an invasion by studding humans, religious speech about Armageddon incoming, all talk, but no one knows where they are, this phenomenon was called “The Collect”, after hundred years another Collect begin and another million human where take. Since the 1rst collect twenty more have been done.
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- Hiatus
- Author
- amylhia
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- 3.5/ 5.0
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- 53
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Community Reviews(4)
- mataneloroRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5its a nice story, plot and concept
but the language department still need much improvement
though if the author can find decent editor to improve the story it will be the best
if you can get past headache and decipher the language i think it will be quite enjoyable
p.s i think background story needed to be improved first, and the daughter is not clear whether she is teenager or pre-teen kid - sirk28Royal Road★★★★ 3.5This can easily be a 4-4.5 star quality story, just that the grammar is hard to understand and there are quite a few mistakes with this get yourself and editor or just someone in rl to read through and give some points and this should be a very enjoyable story(grammar nazis do not read lol)
- Mojag0018Royal Road★★★ 3.0You need some one to proofread your stories and fix all your errors. Saying you English isn't your native tpngue is OK ,but u can't make that an excuse if you want people to love your story that your writing in ENGLISH. Just post for help on forums or ask one of your readers. I personally liked where your story was going ,but I didn't read into it bc you had way to many obvious mistakes.
- lolredRoyal Road★★★ 3.0i would have given 4 star but am cutting one for grammar as its too bad and that too coming from me who don’t mind even reading google translation still i like Ur story and thus read it till latest and will reading. Ur character is like a kinder version of weed .he rather than weed who only cared about his family& friends he his a little nature freak plus also kind to all except those make him mad.the main correction i wanna point out is in various chapter u refer to even different type of energies using he/she don’t do that use it there as he/she refer to gender where as energies like mana/chi or whatever u wanna use they don’t have such distinction generally.hoping to see some improvement soon