Spirit Cultivation

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Description

Liu Xuefeng was a normal boy who had it all planned: get to the same university as his best friend Tianshi and win her love, spending the rest of his life with her.Too bad, even though she liked him too, her rich parents opposed their relationship.The school trip to the mountains was supposed to deepen their relationship, but...An accident broke them apart.He saved her from falling down the cliff but ended up falling to his death himself and ended up reincarnating into a Cultivation World, full of dangers and mysteries.He didn't know though that Tianshi died as well and followed after him, entering the same world.Will the two meet again and share their love without any restrictions?Or will he succumb to the world's temptations, thinking he will never meet her again?

Uploaded by Piokilek - Original Author of Spirit Cultivation

Information

Status: Hiatus
Year: 2020
Author: Piokilek

Royal Road Stats

Rating: 4.2/ 5.0
Followers: 54
Views: 17,514

Chapters(12 total)

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Community Reviews(3)

TheHoblitRoyal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
I've read this story up to chapter 448 on Webnovel, and will continue to follow it.
This is a Slice of Live cultivation story, there is the usual cultivation MC stuff and the usual tropes are around, but the stakes never try to raise themselves into infinity. It is much more casual and character focused than a normal cultivation story.
The character focus is on the MC and his harem, no characters really get brought up and then forgotten forever, especially female leads. The female leads are all unique and have their own reasons for being with the MC.
There are explicit sex scenes, and they are done well. They are not overbearing or excessive, but enough that the relationship with his harem makes sense.
Overall, give it a try if you are looking for a more casual cultivation story with some lewd stuff in it.
kracken1009Royal Road
★★★★★ 5.0
A great story and very well written, the plot is smooth and the character growth makes sence, this is a well thoughtout story and best of all posted by the original author not copied. 10/10 should read atleast once.
I have been following this since it was first posted on webnovel and would highly recomend for anyone and everyone to read at least once!
rulerhadesRoyal Road
★★★ 2.5
So a couple things about this story stand out to me already, although it's only been a couple chapters. I'm having a real hard time convincing myself to go back and read more.
Story: Nothing new or particularly original as far as the story goes, guy gets reincarnated into a world with cultivation. Uses a bunch of cliches in its story, but most of them aren't bad in and of themselves. It's not horrible, but also not great. It does nothing to set itself apart from the rest though, so it comes out feeling rather generic and bland.
Style: Seems to be a telling instead of showing kind of read, not a fan.
Grammar: Considering where this is being hosted it's not bad but there are still a couple things that I've noticed that disrupt reading flow. I tend to be pretty picky about grammar when reading so it could just be me.
Characters: I might be a bit premature here but it's really dragging the story down, already. Let's count how many sh*ts I give about the characters and their relationship so far. Done. Yeah, it was none. Can't really bring myself to care about the MC, part of the issue of being told what happened instead of actually seeing it and growing attached. The female companion is even worse. What the MCs lady did is completely insane. Like stay far away insane. Not romantic, not really sad, more mentally unstable. And the author writes it off as "we don't know what we have until it's gone". Um, no. That statement may be true, but it's not an excuse.
Spoiler: Spoiler
It was described as a crush, and she turned him down because she didn't want to be romantically involved. I know, doesn't mean she didn't have a case of feelings, and she had reasons. Still, they weren't dating and were just close friends. Then he dies and she makes a split second decision that she couldn't possibly live without him, so cue voluntarily falling to her death. That's nutters.
That's about all I got right now. I'll dive back in and read the last couple chapters, maybe make a couple fixes