Spade : Reborn

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This novel has ended on chapter 20. For the next chapter wil be onSpade : AfterLife. Thank you for reading from the beginning until the end. I know it's kinda rush and there's alot of mistakes I made. I try to improve in future!

Putera Mizane

Nodochi Izuno, an expert gamer who is addicted into Online and Fantasy game. One day, he saw a game in online website calledEra Orbit Online. The game is famous since 2017, and it requires VR system to play. As Nodochi order it on online, a message pop-up on his PC. A Registration card needs to fill in to continue the order. He answered all of the security, real-life data( info and details ) informations. The next day, the game arrived. Nodochi put the disk in the computer and put on his VR. It appears that the game is Fantasy, Role-playing type. As he reading the game rules and regulations, the game glitched and Nodochi skipped everything. He force-transported at a strange deep forest. Join he's journey, will it be BAD ending or GOOD?

I want to thank to the people who read my novel and keeping sharp to look more chapters in future! I'm trying my best to find my mistakes and typos. I might make the chapter's words over 1000+ since some of you enjoyed it so much such as I am. I also read my own novel just to feel like a reader. I accept criticsim and ideas, don't be shy. Anyway, thank you so much for reading. I really appericiate. Stay tune for more chapters in future!

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Status
Completed
Year
2018
Author
Putera Mizane

Tags

LITRPGACTIONFANTASYADVENTUREMAGICSUPERNATURALROMANCE SUBPLOTSTRONG LEADMALE LEADMULTIPLE LEAD CHARACTERSREINCARNATIONSTRATEGY

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Rating
2.7/ 5.0
Followers
10
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19,598

Chapters(23 total)

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Community Reviews(2)

  • NeoMareRoyal Road
    ★★★★ 3.5
    It is not a bad story, however, neither it is fascinating or gripping. There are certain mistakes that make you wince while reading (such as the constant mix of did with a past tense verb) and the characters need a bit of work.
    Despite of all this, the story itself it is not bad
  • WolfenshaedRoyal Road
    ★★ 2.0
    Look, I tried to enjoy this, but this has several glaring issues. First of all, get something like grammarly or type it in word or something, anything. The spelling is... technically correct most of the time but things like “did he... died?” Are terrible. Second of all the characters are better, but not by much, you are stereotyping so hard it’s like reading a xianxia with all the translation errors and none of the story.  Work on developing proper characters that we can care about, rather than “person A” or “main character” if I send negative reviews, it’s so I can help you develop your story, and the idea is fine if a bit overdone, but you need to work on your writing in order for people to read and enjoy. This will be difficult considering that English is probably not your first language. Maybe it gets better later I could just be blind and a fool, but I hope this helps you improve.