Sovereign of Blood
Self-Published
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Description
A Glib, Charming, Deceitful, Cunning & Manipulative Vampire with a Grandiose Sense of Self-Worth creates a River of Blood to the Summit of a Dangerous World filled with Magic and Wonders!
Information
- Status
- Hiatus
- Year
- 2018
- Author
- Lumpish_Haggard
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- Rating
- 4.0/ 5.0
- Followers
- 273
- Views
- 31,134
Chapters(6 total)
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Community Reviews(7)
- FalgaRoyal Road★★★★★ 5.0Well a pretty good read, and as due to authors nagging i even got account made on webnovel otherwise i normally read wuxia fics in novel updates and originals in royalroad.
Sry for the rant(just filling in the quota for the adavanced review ;) lol.
Now getting to the story,
1st but not the least its our vampire Mc Taurun with super cool dark powers and a manipulative mind, i am on the dark side give me a cookie(*^*).
2nd for those system loving fans( including myself) will surely enjoy this fic of an not so op mc with a system, well he is op but... ya know i will let the story tell too boring typing.
3rd One of the Main reasons(well one my main reason to be exact lol) Its a harem, so harem loving dudes give this author a 5 star and give me an high five woohoo!!
4th Is it a bird, is it a heli-Dun!Dun!Dun!Dun! Wait!!! Ya drummers reviewing over here sheesh. Ahem!! Let me start again Is it a bird, is it a helicopter, is it a oceanic flying octopussy nay its our very own Vampiric Mc Taurun transported to another world.
Now after mentioning these who wont want to read this fic, and i am bored of typing so ima out. - cnicks032296Royal Road★★★★ 3.5I enjoyed reading this tremendously, the story makes you relate to the mc because who wouldn’t be arrogant if they got an op system and with the newest chapter (ch24) he got a slice of humble pie. I look forward to seeing how the story develops with the mc
- Mi-CiangRoyal Road★★★★ 3.5Well I am writing a review right now is because I read in a comment that saya more review=more chapter.
And I will try my best
Good point:
The Mc is manipulative guy that is pretty good written that is similar to death note, for example if you switch the progenitor'blood with death note you will get a shell of story that is similar to death note.
I think it's a good thing and you give a solid reason for the female character to fall easily to Mc and in mine I made hypnosis the reason
The bad thing is, and this is what most novel is having a problem with including mine too.
The Mc rely to much on system but not that I say it's bad a d in the fact I like it, but I just can't help but to notice this small little problem - GuideGooseRoyal Road★★★ 3.0A tale about a True Vampire from Earth who is hunted down and killed, getting reincarnated into another world by the god known as Dracula due to having the last bloodline. Cool, right?
Yes, it is pretty cool, but the story itself has a lot of issues that you'd have to overlook. The character interactions can be really poor. Sometimes they are amazing, but the author's attempts to show the evil side of our MC are just cringey.
The evil laugh, the "Hehehehe" is cringey. A minor thing, sure, but it just made me feel kinda uncomfortable. Those lines could have easily been reproduced better as a narration. How Dracula is presented is also pretty terrible, and the author makes the MC's character pretty trash as you'll discover early on. He is very emo with how things are and is all about death and destruction and "hehehe."
The plotline isn't very stable. He sort of just goes with the flow, and magically gets into this family where there are all these people with these incrdible bloodlines, and he gets the chance to save one while simultaneously having a go at her. With an age difference of 21 years in that world I believe. I'll have to double check that at a later date. Then he gets to get nice with another with that magic bloodline.
Moving on to the school arc, or attempt at one. It's really just bad. The author tries to go for a competition thing in the beginning, and he does a good job at it to be honest, but the reason it is bad is due to the teacher that takes interest in him. We are given no information about who he is or where he is from. All he does is give the MC a mental test and act all suspicious.
Spoiler: Only Read If Past Chapter 31
Seems fine, right? Well, that would be the case if it wasn't for around chapter 30 when the story goes from attempting to slowly pour information to just dumping the bucket. The teacher knows all about him being a vampire, says "us" a lot, might be a vampire, the Flame Emperor is friends with Dracula, the girl from that magic fam - BlodWeddRoyal Road★★★ 3.0The story is shallow and simple.
The main character is two dimensional with the thought procces either being witheld from our view or irrational in some way - it gives a bad taste.
It is still enjoyable but not recommended.
To the author i will say: Pace your story better and give better reasoning and flow to your story and characters. - TheFreakRoyal Road★★★ 3.0It's average in many aspects, but the biggest issue is the writing style and system used. They are never truly explained, which makes it all the more annoying. It just seem very mindless, like there is no thought behind the story.
- ILoveAnimeRoyal Road★★★ 2.5Its not that bad or that good, but you can read it. It's pretty similar to some average xianxia, not much thought put into it.
As a story its bad, but as a read its ok. System doesn't make sense and characters are really simple.